The walls are closing in in mournful silence
Away they chase you from your dark abode
To Kingdom of the Night where trees
Line up the streets like silent knights
To keep you quiet company.
Remembering the solitude of Autumn
That stripped the foliage, their nakedness revealed.
They wish to lengthen the repose of birds.
But hours tiptoe by, and now behold!
Unable to endure your somber grief,
They come awake and wake the birds that sing
An ode to you and praise eternal Life!
A life that's filled with Sun which often failed
To cuddle and warm up your sullen soul,
A life where summer breeze is like love's breath,
The very Love that has rejected you.
The birds remember rivers' springtime rise
Their mighty waters flooding farms and towns,
And their sad demise as floods recede
Dried out by the Sun and birds can hear
The sad song of the rivers that bemoan
Their former might when waters ran so fast
Competing with wild horses' crazy dash.
The rivers cry, unable to shed a tear,
For happiness they once possessed.
The birds know it all, but do not comprehend
Why one would wait for them
In shadows of dark yard.
Behold, the clouds gathered in the sky
And spiteful thunder cracked
To stifle muffled cry of lonely soul.
The stars shone brightly to avoid disgrace
Their failure to dispel the sadness in your eyes
Which was but the reflection of your soul
That spent its time in mournful solitude!
In deep of night the rain will fall on trees
And rush to wash the dust from drowsy leaves
So lovers’ sleeping in a sweet embrace
When Sun returns enjoy a blissful gaze.
Meanwhile our voyager still roams the yard,
And mourns her love that died in days of yore.
The wind had failed to dry up all her tears,
They seeped into her heart and only He,
To whom she pledged her love could dry the tears
From her tormented soul, alas, he never came!
Life flows like a river, and it’s finite:
Like water that before was gently flowing
Touched by the Sun turns into weightless vapor
And wafts away into the endless yonder.
But Sun will rule the sky for eons longer
And stars will still be gracing Night’s dark shawl,
And birds will still sing odes in morning stillness
When lonely soul will leave the wretched Earth
And take its love along to dwell in Heaven.
The walls of house protect the solemn silence
Which seldom is disturbed by moans of poets
Who outlived the ages of seclusion.
From yellowed pages scream in agony
The ones who were committed to the dungeons
Of merciless and evil Solitude.
Imprisoned with no parole they were granted
Eternal life on Earth.
By Liana Margiva
Translated from Russian by Anatol Kardiukov
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Reviews of "Solitude"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2011
Excellent writing sweet lady...wowwwww...stay safe and well..Hugsss
Liana,
Your work is wonderful;the vivid language and images stay on the mind long after the reading ends.
Continued success in the new year.
Barbara Henry
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2010
Wonderful imagery in every line, Liana. Well done. I enjoyed this wlak through time and space.
Dear Liana, This is a beautiful poem and inspite of all the dark and heavy mood it conveys, hope is also there as you say: "But Sun will rule the sky for eons longer" The soul if not prepared will have to wait for eons. Thank you my friend for sharing. Love emile
I feel deep pain and meloncholy in this poem; yet, the descriptive inclusions about nature draw me back into the world away from the solitude and I see beauty there. The following stanza was my favorite:
Life flows like a river, and it’s finite:
Like water that before was gently flowing
Touched by the Sun turns into weightless vapor
And wafts away into the endless yonder.
Always You Offer Beautiful Translations
and a pristine picturesque scenery inside
and in closing I have wondered if we are
imprisoned rebirthing here till we get it right
Dear Liana , You are a poets poet! Your writing has such depth and imagery. Many times I sense sadness, yet beauty prevails and transports the reader to the core of the poem. Love...M
Magnificent poem that I read aloud to my daughter, an accomplished poet,unlike me who struggles to make words and meter work. She loved it too!!! She said to ask if you have written in english so that she can see what comes unfiltered without the translations.
Many a poet exists in solitude. Your images here are brilliant, vivid, affecting and I'm so glad to read a new piece by you, Liana. Such beautiful and emotive work! ~Hugs, Elizabeth
But somewhere there's a pair of arms to wrap around her like a soft, warmth cocoon that with tenderness will protect the chrysalis until the moment when she will metamorphose into a butterfly and go away, free of any solitude.
Tres magnifique!!!
Liana, when I read your work, it's as though I've discovered a hidden gem. I have missed reading your work, but know that it is always well worth the wait...you never disappoint.
A PORTRAIT OF A SOUL, THE BREATH...OF ONE EXISTING IN A COMMITTED STATE OF SOLITUDE FOR MANY MOURNFUL, LONELY SEASONS....THE SOLITUDE OF ALL NATURE; THE SUN, THE STARS THE BIRDS AND FLOWING RIVER CAN ATTEST TO THE PAIN AND TORMENT OF ONE ABANDONED TRAGICALLY, BY DEATH...'TIL ETERNAL LIFE BRINGS LOVE'S PEACE. BUT THE AGED, YELLOW PAPER ON WHICH POETS CAPTURE THE SCREAMS OF THE ONCE WRETCHED STATE, OF SUCH A SOUL...NOT EVEN THE STING OF DEATH CAN DISPEL, RELEASE.....FOR IT IS STILL... AND WILL EVER BE...IN SOLITUDE...ON EARTH. WELL, LIANA, WE WAITED FOR YOU, THE WONDERFUL STORY TELLER, TO ONCE AGAIN SHARE HER GIFT WITH US AND WE ARE NOT DISAPPOINTED AT ALL. THE WAIT WAS WELL WORTH IT FOR YOU HAVE WRITTEN A MOST ENJOYABLE WORK IN YOUR UNIQUE, DISTINCT STYLE. WELL DONE AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE AND BLESSINGS...
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Your work is wonderful;the vivid language and images stay on the mind long after the reading ends.
Continued success in the new year.
Barbara Henry
Happy new year!
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Life flows like a river, and it’s finite:
Like water that before was gently flowing
Touched by the Sun turns into weightless vapor
And wafts away into the endless yonder.
A wonderful write....
and a pristine picturesque scenery inside
and in closing I have wondered if we are
imprisoned rebirthing here till we get it right
Eternality of Love's Bounty
Vickie
Sandie Angel :o)
Be always safe,
Karen
Magnificent poem that I read aloud to my daughter, an accomplished poet,unlike me who struggles to make words and meter work. She loved it too!!! She said to ask if you have written in english so that she can see what comes unfiltered without the translations.
Love, Micki
Peace,
Dayvid
Carole~
Tres magnifique!!!
Georg
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GOD BLESS YOU
TONY