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If My Sand Castle Drowns, Can I Live With You…?
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(everybody needs somebody...)
spoken with the lisp of a child… one of those universal truths we sometimes miss... lost in emptiness, building ephemeral dreams without concrete foundations drifting unfettered, but unsecured— and yes, there is a difference… a life alone is a life a life entwined is a miracle to me I speak for myself and not for you for no one has the right to dictate your reality but if my castle wanders too close to the sea unnoticed and dissolves into bits of shapeless sand… will you extend to me a lifeline? will you hold out your hand?

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 9, 2008

Since death of hubby Aug 17 07 I feel I don't want anyone else in my life. He was my 2nd husband and very much different from the lst and a loving and caring person for me to live with. Memories of him are with me in spirit and I cannot see myself finding another like him to satisfy my as he did. He was an unusual and all mine person. Great personality, laughter, and loved people.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 17, 2003

Great write!!!

My favorite:
a life alone is a life
a life entwined is a miracle

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