Poetic Home -- Not for Rent (Jill's Challenge) (poem) by Connie Faust on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on June 11, 2008

I think my thoughts are with you, Connie! I am comfortable in my home...
Cryssa :~)

Reviewed on June 9, 2008

Beautifully written with heartfelt feelings. The first two sentences really captured my attention and makes me wonder how many authors/poets these words describe. Great write.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

How creative my friend, loved this twist on Jill's challenge. It was a fun challenge...I ended up writing two! Can't wait for the next one to come along! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 5, 2008

Love the way you kept your home your own but offered to share it's treasures, also the way you tied it into the den... high score for this one.

Fee

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Cleverly penned - sounds like a wonderful place to be. And it is - feels like home whenever I visit - well done. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

How much for that room? And do you allow dogs? Excellent write. You have a natural rhythm and timing in your writing that is innate. Loved your poem. Liz

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

How about a lease/purchase then...;) ed

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Did your own thing, Congrats for doing it and being brave enough to go against the rules. Doesn't hurt a thing. Words expressed by you are the sure thing. Always glad to read your writes. **********

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Very Beautiful!

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Connie,
You may have "changed the rules" but I love it! I love my poetic home too much to ever up and leave it; that's for sure. I came close once and a sad twist of fate kept me writing. I took that as a sign that my pen should never leave me.
Thanks for thinking outside the box on this one and for adding your addition to the challenge! This has been a fun one.

Jill

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Great job, my sis. I could picture all of it. Loved this. This home of mine, though small in size, hosts lovely visions still undreamt; when I but lift my pen to write, my world's at peace; I am content.

I think you are for you have all you love and you have a special relationship with your father. Love ya, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A fabulous addition to the challenge, very descriptive and from your heart....

Be always safe,
Karen