Very nice poem and imagery, great rhythm.

Liz,

I love this one. It shows how you've seen mostly hard times & had to give up your dreams because of it. What I love is the fresh, positive outlook towards the end of this piece. Since I wrote my first book, so many have told me their shoulda, coulda, woulda's. I can't help but tilt my head and look at them as though bewildered. No one should stop working toward their goals until their heart stops beating. It's never too late to turn things around and reach for the stars. I also see another meaning in this one; a recent battle being won with health or a personal situation. This poem is so inspirational, and I love the imagery and meaning. This one goes in my library, Liz!

Sheila

Evolving through ( ) as only you(can)*Evol_Ted

Poignant and well described. My mother and sister both committed suicide so I know a little about bi-polar disorder. My "White Rosebud" is about depression. I'd like to hear what you think about it.

Lovely writing sweet lady...Happy Holidays....stay safe and well...Hugsssssssss

Very nicely said. Enjoyed.

Liz, I love your determination,and I wish you all the best in future endeavors!Excellent message poem! Have a blessed Christmas and New Year!

Love,
Eileen

Love and best wishes,

Regis

Seems that my whole life is one big struggle.....:(

change and motion are the ingredients in leaving behind that which is not long applicable ...

Beautifully written with very strong imagery....

Be safe,
Karen

Good imagery to show the strong will and knowledge that makes you stay away from what you identified as dark and destructive.
Bad choice... heartache... these words sound sadly familiar.

Axilea

This is powerfully penned, Elizabeth. We just move on, because we can. :)

(((HUGS))), love and Merry Christmas,

karla.

We all face troubles through life but we have to learn from them and move on with a smile that we can and will do better.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

After the struggle there is great relief in the smile of triumph . . .

Victory!