Liz, this little tid bit is very interesting
it is hard to realize when we are the one's wearing blinders at times. But that is the point of deception's view.
Or we already know & that is the phantom unseen, but we know it's there we can feel it (the wind invisible but felt)...very interesting perspective thoughts come from this piece
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Phamtoms coming at you, you can keep pretending in fact you need to sometimes, and all a delusion is only in your mind. Delusions can be flown away by the phantoms in the wind too. This is my differing perception. Good write**********
Excellent, Liz! it is said the Senryu is used when it concerns people.However, in a recent article from the world of poetry they say the modern way is that all is considered Haiku! Also, the classic 5-7-5,is no different than the lesser or greater numbers such as 3-5-3...or 6-8-6...all is now legit haiku! hope that doesn't confuse you even more;-) hahaha...ET
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Awesome title and penning . . . well-done!!
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it is hard to realize when we are the one's wearing blinders at times. But that is the point of deception's view.
Or we already know & that is the phantom unseen, but we know it's there we can feel it (the wind invisible but felt)...very interesting perspective thoughts come from this piece
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
These few words draw so much imagery. You have my imagination taking off! Great job on this poem. Love and Hugs~
Sheila
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Michelle~
This as an excellent poem, Elizabeth, whatever label you put on it :)
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
Agreed.