Uncut Version (poem) by Elizabeth A. Price on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 26, 2009

Tender yet powerful in it's disclosure of the bare facts. Ramblings are often very cathartic. Well penned. J'nia

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on July 4, 2009

Powerful and touching.

Reviewed on June 8, 2009

I don't think that anyone can argue that life isn't just pretty darned harsh for all of us a good share of the time. I share the in the comments about what a good, gutsy poem this is, Liz, but I also want you to remember His admonition, "Seek and you will find." Sometimes it takes only the smallest motion to take care of ourselves in our trials, only a little step of faith, and He meets us. I just wrote an article on how depression can be productive if you�care to look at it--it's not depressing. I have hopes that it could help some other people.......Jerry

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on May 31, 2009

Emotionally gutsy, this poem reaches right inside the reader. Strong poem.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Liz old friend, you have more guts ans stamina than any four people I know. You already know you will find a way to get through everything that falls on you. I am back and can deflect as much as possible for an old friend. Just keep writing, no matter how dark it seems, keep the words falling. God hears you, he is the one dishing out the guts!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

It takes a lot to write like this,I applaud you, and thank you for sharing. There are no magic answers,as you have discovred, but I do think that perservering in prayer for your grandaughter is the right thing to do,and surprisingly when your mind is off self ,you may start receiving some answers to your personal prayers.

Love and prayers,
Eileen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Vivid portrayal of your life.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Hi Elizabeth, The mood cycle will pass... but I always am amazed and say "My God above, he must have heard Because I'm still here and alive".
Thank you for sharing this... stay strong...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

Mood cycling - I think something we all do - and I hope a more peaceful mood is ahead.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on May 28, 2009

I hope and pray things will turn around for all of you. Sending you a hug. You are stronger than you know.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

Liz,
This is a heart-filled prayer for the future of your family. I hope you find the peace you pray for. Thanks for sharing these words. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

This is so easy for me to understand and empathize with, I had my young granddaugher all tonight and over a slight dissagreement with her parents on child raising I felt bad but knew it was not my call to butt in.

Fee