Poetic License
Poetic license, a great body implanted.
Yes, poetry readers of the world granted
Each licentiate broad range of latitude:
Pen words of emotion: anger, gratitude, …
Make up words that sound just right,
Bend meaning if somewhat slight,
Butt word images hard to each other,
With normal conjunctions never bother.
But readers’ demands are conscientious:
They distinguish license from licentious.
Some basic form they ask to communicate
Discrete thoughts and images discriminate.
‘Tis one thing, if we invent phrase or word,
So a melodic, rhythmic tune be heard,
Yet another to misspell or language ill-form,
From carelessness or ignorance borne,
Or cover slothfulness by obscure word play
That confuses and leads our patron away
From the poetic goal of transitioning norms:
Exceptional ideas, harmonies, and forms.
We love our relatives — well-wishers,
Forgivers — for substance, diligent fishers,
But when publishing to broader community,
All works compete, and none gets immunity.
Thousands of poems scream for attention,
Only one best, no honorable mention.
This arena, form counts, readers are tough,
And substantively best, not good enough.
Literary critics do not find their voice
In corporeal whipping, curtailing choice.
But deliver vicious cuts non-derisively,
Damn with faint praise, ignore incisively.
So, the competitive poet’s creative intent
Is error free writ to consciously invent
Thrilling substance that catches the eye,
Good form, a nonpareil linguistic ply.
And poetic license, among other tools,
Is judgment applied — within the rules.
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jessica
aka
gypsie
This poem will go into my library, and be contemplated upon each time I sit down to write.
Thanks for these sage words.
Thankyou Leland..
give us more!!!
Vesna :)
Seriously, with your usual verve you covered all the bases, crossed the Ts and dotted the Is. If one does not strive to do his/her best, then greatness cannot be achieved. Keep writing like this and you'll go down as one of the great thinkers of our time.
Love how many writers pour their hearts and souls into each word, verse, rhyme ... time after time.
Your message is a wise one ... though I'm never one to judge :)!
Love always,
:)Sandy
Carmen
Blessings*Love*Dreams
~Alexandra~
Well written and well said, Leland! ~~Bonnie Q
You just threw us the challenge, didn't you?
I am astonished at how you just completely dissected the thing - I.e. You just gave me a glimpse of 'stuff' I've never seen before, but have a vague, unthinking awareness of. Mmmmm, perhaps the car and the mechanic is a better analogy. I drive the car around, enjoy it immensely but I really have little idea of how it is put together. You must be one of our literary AA men!
Thanks!
This poem, "Poetic License" is in contents and message, a true masterpiece. Two elements that, on words of Author-Poet Regina Pounds: "Contents and Message are the priorities of any poem".
Honorable Author-Poet Leland Waldrip:
I thank You for standing for Voicing an alert in this poetic path that can ARROW the way to many others.
I am pleased to learn from Your "Poetic License".
My gratitude, respect and admiration.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Amor
You employ this wonderful language of ours beyond shop-worn words in coherent fashion with comprehensible and most worthwhile message! Bravo!
(Now, if you like what I just said, you might like my "I'm No Critic..." :)
Love Tinka
This is very well done.
Thank you!
"So, the competitive poet’s creative intent
Is error free writ to consciously invent
Thrilling substance that catches the eye,
Good form, a nonpareil linguistic ply.
And poetic license, among other tools,
Is judgment applied — within the rules."
Lady Peg