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Poetic License
by Leland Waldrip → (All Poetry by Leland Waldrip)
  
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I present this poem, not as a literary expert or critic, not as a judgmental piece, but as an expression of some observations of the competitiveness of the literary scene.

Poetic License


 


Poetic license, a great body implanted.


Yes, poetry readers of the world granted


 


Each licentiate broad range of latitude:


Pen words of emotion: anger, gratitude, …


 


Make up words that sound just right,


Bend meaning if somewhat slight,


 


Butt word images hard to each other,


With normal conjunctions never bother.


 


But readers’ demands are conscientious:


They distinguish license from licentious.


 


Some basic form they ask to communicate


Discrete thoughts and images discriminate.


 


‘Tis one thing, if we invent phrase or word,


So a melodic, rhythmic tune be heard,


 


Yet another to misspell or language ill-form,


From carelessness or ignorance borne,


 


Or cover slothfulness by obscure word play


That confuses and leads our patron away


 


From the poetic goal of transitioning norms:


Exceptional ideas, harmonies, and forms.


 


We love our relatives — well-wishers,


Forgivers — for substance, diligent fishers,


 


But when publishing to broader community,


All works compete, and none gets immunity.


 


Thousands of poems scream for attention,


Only one best, no honorable mention.


 


This arena, form counts, readers are tough,


And substantively best, not good enough.


 


Literary critics do not find their voice


In corporeal whipping, curtailing choice.


 


But deliver vicious cuts non-derisively,


Damn with faint praise, ignore incisively.


 


So, the competitive poet’s creative intent


Is error free writ to consciously invent


 


Thrilling substance that catches the eye,


Good form, a nonpareil linguistic ply.


 


And poetic license, among other tools,


Is judgment applied — within the rules.


  


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 Reviews of "Poetic License"
Reviewed by Divinity 11 (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2004
very very good, thank you for pointing these things out and doing it in such a beautiful way..

heh
jessica
aka
gypsie

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2004
Leland, you've hit on the main challenge I contemplate each time I sit before my paper "canvas"...and that is how to communicate well for an audience while keeping the style(s) to which I have become accustomed.

This poem will go into my library, and be contemplated upon each time I sit down to write.

Thanks for these sage words.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
..as I always say Leland..I leave your den...more the wiser..and head bent ...darn it ...so I mess up now and then..hmmmm..LOL!
Thankyou Leland..
give us more!!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Darn! Have been writing poetry all these years without a license. Where can I get one so that I'll be legal? ;-)

Seriously, with your usual verve you covered all the bases, crossed the Ts and dotted the Is. If one does not strive to do his/her best, then greatness cannot be achieved. Keep writing like this and you'll go down as one of the great thinkers of our time.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Excellent and as close to perfection as you can get, even if I am one of the abusers of words;-)Thanks for always being a good example Leland...I appreciate it.

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2004
Yes. I liked the way you put this together yet made a very succinct point in doing so

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Very good and strongly stated in significance of meaning. Thank you, Leland. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed on January 6, 2004
You nailed quite a bit here with your expert poetic talent. I think you could write the Bible over in rhyme L. As far as my writing goes, it's very easy to do because I'm not really after anything. I don't waste time worrying anymore about acceptance. Sometimes I get kind of pissed about normal formalities and write the hell out of them in the opposite direction. I love controversy as long as it speaks for a good purpose. Writing is merely a hobby to me and a way to talk to myself, plus killing my boredom. G

Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Me? I write for the sheer joy of it but it is nice to have others enjoy that which we write :)!
Love how many writers pour their hearts and souls into each word, verse, rhyme ... time after time.
Your message is a wise one ... though I'm never one to judge :)!
Love always,
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Love those last two lines. I agree with the statement made about content and message. Form comes before rule. But eventually the rule has to come into play, or content and message can lose impact, or intention.

Carmen

Reviewed on January 6, 2004
Well... not even considering myself a poet or even closer, and even less so a critic, I must confess my feeling that trying to make poetry "politically correct"... may actually murder it - and I may very well be murdered for what I just said... **g**. Content and message, as quoted by Master Poet Andre, are indeed priorities in poetry, but also, and this is a very arguable personal view... of the heart... expressing and through expression, imprinting emotions, from the spirit of the poet to that of the reader. Poetry with a soul, and not just beautifully rhyming words. Your poetry does indeed have soul, my friend, and what a powerful one it is, here in the open... expressing and imprinting. Masterfully.
Blessings*Love*Dreams
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Leland...what a write my friend...very excellent...loved this much!!!!!

Reviewed by Bonita Quesinberry
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
"Make up words that sound just right,Bend meaning if somewhat slight" I must laugh, for this line recalls a time when I had teens in my home for an in-resident intensive life-encompassing 24/7 counseling program. Part of the curriculum was to stimulate their creativity. Cheryl wrote poetry that flowed and rhymed beautifully. The only problem was she would use a word simply because it rhymed and she like the sound of it. She usually didn't even know the definition of such words, so the drift of her message became lost in a fog of meaningless words.

Well written and well said, Leland! ~~Bonnie Q

Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Well, Leyland!
You just threw us the challenge, didn't you?
I am astonished at how you just completely dissected the thing - I.e. You just gave me a glimpse of 'stuff' I've never seen before, but have a vague, unthinking awareness of. Mmmmm, perhaps the car and the mechanic is a better analogy. I drive the car around, enjoy it immensely but I really have little idea of how it is put together. You must be one of our literary AA men!
Thanks!

Reviewed on January 5, 2004
"Poetic License" is to be used to improve the verse, not to "Assassinate the Language or Poetry".

This poem, "Poetic License" is in contents and message, a true masterpiece. Two elements that, on words of Author-Poet Regina Pounds: "Contents and Message are the priorities of any poem".

Honorable Author-Poet Leland Waldrip:

I thank You for standing for Voicing an alert in this poetic path that can ARROW the way to many others.

I am pleased to learn from Your "Poetic License".

My gratitude, respect and admiration.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 5, 2004
I like this I like this. So now Leland must I truly stop attempting to write poetry?

Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
This ought to be the AuthorsDen motto - or at least something we should print out and post by our computer prior to our next visit/posting/comment on someone's material!!! Well said Leland.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Just superb, I plead guilty for loving to make up fun or unusual words, this is presact and fanerifik.. but i just write for fun not to impress with my oxford english believe it or not, but to express and rule busting,fun fun fun

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
OUTSTANDING, Leland! Well written and well said!

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
EXCELLENT read and message LELAND!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Excellent work, Leland. Have a fruitful New Year.
Amor

Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Leland, this is splendid! An artistic coup!
You employ this wonderful language of ours beyond shop-worn words in coherent fashion with comprehensible and most worthwhile message! Bravo!
(Now, if you like what I just said, you might like my "I'm No Critic..." :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Most excellent post Leland!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2004
Bravo Leland,
This is very well done.
Thank you!
"So, the competitive poet’s creative intent



Is error free writ to consciously invent



Thrilling substance that catches the eye,



Good form, a nonpareil linguistic ply.



And poetic license, among other tools,



Is judgment applied — within the rules."

Lady Peg




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