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The Red Bricks
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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Lite-Hearted and Painful
No matter what the circumstance: We Suffer through Life for God's Purpose.
Don't forget to remove the bricks. I was thrown 15 feet against the house.


 

REMEMBER to remove

 the bricks when you finish

having your fun.

Daddy also built you one.

Why can't you be happy.

Add two more brick to

 reach your height.

Our swing set hanging high

from pine trees with the sun

peeking though from the sky,

was fun to play with everday.

My sister was'nt satisfied

unless she was on the other

tree with the tall swing built for me.

 I did'nt mine her swinging,  on the

tall swing which was mine.

 But forgetting to remove the red bricks

 for me to play again was a big mistake

 indeed.  Which hurt so badly the day

I forgot and almost killed myself.

It's amazing I am alive 

after the blunder I survived.

I'm glad Jesus loved me at six

 as much as He loves me now,

Cause I sure did thank Him,

While I lived about a month

with  big fat head lump.

Louisa A Dobbnis
 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "The Red Bricks"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
Loved it my friend...I too have survived through many childhood antics...and didn't realize the seriousness of them untill much later, probably when I had children of my own...God is good, always watching over us...enjoyed this.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I have been "saved" many times from my carelessness. Thank you for this wise reminder, Louisa. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I love this one Louisa a slice of wisdom and life.....

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
We who survive indeed have been blessed by Jesus. Amen.


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