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Shut Up!
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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I can't think of anything to say,

so I'm keeping my mouth shut.

My sister said, "Let me miss you,

you talk too much".

I went home and cried.

She thinks she is doing me

a favor by not taking

up so much of my time.

She says old people are in the way.

I enjoy helping older people

and making them happy.

You just can't please everybody.

Louisa A Dobbins-Bull

(c) 2008
 
 


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Reviewed on January 6, 2008

Awww so sorry and it is sad.
I do not think anyone should shut up especially when you are amongst loved ones. On another note to love the elderly and to hear the melody of notes that they share couldn't be anything better I think, however my opinion. There is so much to learn from one another and it is heart shattering when someone thinks another should shut up...well as writers/(probably talkers too(smile) it is probably said to us all...however it does not make the pain any less or any less deeper.

Lots of love, keep talking,
Friend Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Oh, this is tooo sad!!!!! I hope you feel better soon!!!!!
Love and best wishes for the New Year!!!!!!

((((( Hugs )))))

Sandie May Angel :o(

Reviewed on January 3, 2008
Sad write; but you keep on talking! I am never gonna' tell you to shut up!! I tend to be a little shy around strangers, but once I get to know them, then they can't shut me up! LOL Ask my twin; she knows! LOL Especially when it comes to Cajun music, my Christian faith, or cats! LOL Or my health! LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Good write, but sad!!

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 3, 2008
You are right my friend, we can't please everyone all of the time...but you keep talking...even if it is with the keys on your keyboard and I'll keep reading/listening...I would love to come over and sit down with a cup of coffee and chat with you, it would be a toss up of which one of us talked the most...sounds like it could be a great evening of good ole conversation....talk/write on my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.


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