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Louisa A Dobbins

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Jesus Set the Standard
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It seemed about this time,
in nineteen and fifty five.
I was a child of only five.
A man caught me in his arms.
He was strong and big, I'm
glad 'cause I was born a big
girl of almost 12 pounds.

He had to be strong, cause I had
learned that my granny was in
that long box and would'nt
be back no more.  why...why?
I needed to know, why do you put
my granny in a deep dark hole?
When I did learn it changed my life.
It was the time I became whole.

The big man said if I should
see granny again, how I must live.
I had to walk and talk like Jesus
and be a teacher too and help
a child to live and grow, to walk
and talk like Jesus wants us to do.
Do not forget to tell a child
before they see that deep dark hole,
Jesus is the Savior of all the world
He set the standard of how to grow,
and how all earthly life will begin
and end at the gate of eternity.

Louisa A Dobbins
(c) 2008

 


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 Reviews of "Jesus Set the Standard"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on July 9, 2012
SOME THINGS WE SHOULD PRAY TO FORGET...BUT THERE ARE OTHER THINGS THAT WE NEVER WANT TO FORGET. SO THOUGH THAT TIME WAS PAINFUL AND SO HARD FOR YOU, WITH IT CAME THE UNDERSTANDING OF WHERE YOUR GRANDMA HAD GONE AND WHERE YOU ONE DAY WOULD GO TOO. BECAUSE WHAT SEEMED LIKE THE END...WAS REALLY THE BEGINNING. JESUS' STANDARDS ARE OFTEN HARD TO SEE, BUT SO SWEET WHEN WE 'UNDERSTAND'. A WONDERFUL WORK THAT I WILL SAVE TO MY LIBRARY. GOD BLESS YOU, LOUISA AND THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Louisa,
Beautiful and thought provoking write. Jesus is my Lord and Saviour, yes He set the standard for all.

Many blessings,
~Linda

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Indeed HE did dear Louisa! And that standard was, and is, exemplary! Holiday blessings to you and yours ...
richard lloyd cederberg

Reviewed on November 30, 2008
Louisa,

Very beautiful written with such an important message.

Mary

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 30, 2008
What a beautiful write Louisa. Yes, Jesus set the standard my friend and you have said it so well here. Thank you for sharing this and God bless.


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