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Foreclosure Day...
by Joyce E Bowling → (All Poetry by Joyce E Bowling)
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Foreclosure Day…

 

It stood upon the hill,

Silent as I passed by,

 A golden glow shone through,
the lace covered windows…


Lucky, I thought as I dreamed of the life inside,
but I was on the outside looking in.


The year was 1983,

A year never to be forgotten,
layoff, broken budget, and returned furniture.
Upon the porch of this humble white home,


Whicker furniture where one could relax and read.
The yard with beautiful shade trees,


And the shutters painted green.
But I was on the outside looking in.


Times were tough,
macaronis, beans, and potatoes were a smorgasbord,


Wood heat to reduce the electric bill,

Yard sales galore,

Two part time jobs to replace the one lost,

A three-year old son whom didn’t realize,

But only enjoyed his daddy being home.

I with fear for another was on the way.

Smoke curled upward from the little house upon the hill,

As snow covered the ground,

Frost clung to the lit windows,

I was on the outside looking in.

The decision had to be made,

For it was nearing foreclosure day,

Boxes lined the hall,

And soon the bed of the pickup truck,

But where would we go?

The news came on a Friday afternoon…

I’ll never forget that day…

The little white house upon the hill,

Yes, it was empty and awaiting me,

Our family was a family in need,

And the little house was a house in need of a family.

Where had the occupants gone,

Who were they and why did they leave such a wonderful home?

 Would I ever know?

It was 1984…

A year to never be forgotten,

I was on the inside looking out...

 

Written By: Joyce Bowling

©Copyright 2007

All Rights Reserved

 

Looking back…this seems like another life, another time. It also makes me appreciate our farm, home, family, and every blessing that we’ve been given. This poem was actually written based upon two of the hardest years of our lives. My husband lost his job when the coal industry began to weaken, I was pregnant with our second child and we actually lost our home. We did move into the little white house upon the hill for about a year, until God made a way for us. There was a very good reason why the occupants moved out of the little white house on the hill, the same as we, but that will be divulged in a different write…to be continued….
 


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 Reviews of "Foreclosure Day..."
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
I loved this one and the finale one you are so beautiful Joyce your trust and faith.....

Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2007
I stood in a food pantry line for the first time in my life just a few months ago. I lost my job after 10 years of great service. No warning, just don't need you anymore. Being a single parent I had been making a great 40,000 plus income for my son and I. Then suddenly, nothing for almost 8 weeks. Not eligible for a thing. Getting the 2 bags of that food really humbled me. From that day on grocery shopping took on new meaning for me. I could keep most from my son except the absence of good food. Then any food would do.

Sorry to go on but this is what your poem reminded me of today. I have always been a gratful woman and this experience has given me even more than it took away.

Love & Peace,
Rebecca

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
Joyce - I'm amazed and pleased with the response here. What a classic you've given us. I'm old enough to remember that my family was never the victim of foreclosure, because it never owned a house until I was married and gone from it. What sweet poignancy you create with you pen, here. Thank you, good poet. - Bill

Reviewed on February 4, 2007
P.s. YOur email BoX is full my treaured gem of the den, and my heart!

This brought back memories, I use to call Yard Sale Burnout... Every weekend, to just get by till the next week. Still no changes, This poem was our Foreclosurer too!
Those days make us who we are now!
Great Poem and Heart Joyce!
~~~
YOU know you have a good man, when HE doesn't walk away and leave
YOu will it all and the kids to attend to ALONE...
~~~
Glad it's over now!
GOD Bless!God Speed!
WArmest Blessings and WArmer HuGs,WArrior Sheeeooxx

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on January 27, 2007
Many will and can relate to your reflective writing in this piece...nice work!
Myrna

Reviewed on January 25, 2007
great reflective poetry Joyce, many times I'm on the outside looking in on a lovely home but I appreciate the one I own

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 25, 2007
I love your attitude. Blessings to you, Joyce and thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on January 25, 2007
Despite the hard times you and your family went through, the fact that you remained together and rebuilt your life is absolutely amazing and has not gone unrewarded.

Thank you so much for sharing such a personal time with all of us. Just went you think things can't get any worse, at least people know that there is still a light on the other end of the tunnel. Excellent write.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
Love your gift of memoir, Joyce. Treasure it. So many of us lose our ability to lay hold of past "history" because, if it was tinged with pain, we have blotted it out. Bless you for remembering. You are the stronger and more in control for it. And you are a wonderful "story"-teller. Yes, please do continue. We await with eagerness. TY K xx

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
Your parents did such a wonderful job raising you, dear lady. Your heart is so full of goodness and love, your soul is strong and solid, and you are blessed with an extraordinary writing talent to share your wonderful gifts with readers -- not for us in just the 'now', but for generations to come to enjoy. This is evident in all you write and I feel so blessed to know you and have you as a friend. Thank you, sweet poet lady.
Much love,
CJ

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
The fact that you are able to look at the possitive in everything, is truly a blessing. God Bless you, Holly

Reviewed by Deborah Russell
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
God is good and His blessings are plentiful.
Thanks for sharing, Joyce.

Reviewed on January 23, 2007
Beautiful sentiments! Some memories are made beautiful because of the events in our lives, not necessary good events, but the events that we fought to conquer.

Wonderful write, Joyce!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
God is good, eh Joyce? He works in mysterious ways. I think you know what I mean. Looking forward to the continuation....

God Bless
LOL
Lena

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
this is very touching and easily hits the hearts of many...who among us has not suffered or had such reversals? how we appreciate more deeply afterward, right?

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
They say everything happens for a reason
although at times its hard to realize
from tough times do come blessings
God is good
survival is blessed

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Filled with memories from the past. There have been hard times for many of us, yet we endured them and perhaps became wiser . I really enjoyed this . Thank you for sharing the story with us. God Bless !........M

Reviewed by Loretta Scott
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Hi Joyce, what a beautiful reminder for all of us to know, just how blessed we are. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt warming blessing. Oh what a harvest we reap, oh what a blessing when we know it's meant from the Father above.

Blessings always to you, Loretta

Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
This is so heart touchingly beautiful, Joyce! Your words brought tears to my eyes. I truly understand what it is like to loose your home, for I have been there as well. God does answer our prayers. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Wonderful writing thanks for sharing this hard time you had in life. In 2001 I went through a hard time lost our house my son left me. God brought us through it just as God brought you through. You have a beautiful way of expressing.
Thanks Angela

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
The universe seems to rescue people when they need it, in your case literally, physically. But I've known som many people who needed a mental or spiritual or emotional life line and found it. There's a thin line between outside looking in and inside looking out. Good for you and blessings.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Thank you for sharing this personal time with us! Your ability to put it in such lovely poetic form is a blessing. Very inspiring!

Reviewed by Linda Wells (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
It was 1956 that the same thing happened in our family. My dad was layed off from the coal mines and there was just not a job to be found then. They packed up what few pieces of furniture we had and moved to Ohio. I'll never forget that little pink house we had, the woods to play in and the long forgotten paths that we made. My mother cried all the way to Ohio, we were leaving everything familiar to come to the city where we knew not a soul. How frightened we all were! How homesick we were for years to come. You were so blessed to find your Oasis, Joyce. Times were hard then, and sometimes we had to relocate to survive. I think we appreciate what we have now, because of the things we had to lose and do without. I love to read your words, you have a poetic pen when it comes to writing, for sure. Don't keep us waiting too long for the conclusion!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
It is always difficult to pass through a tough time where a job is lost and a child is on the way. But God will always help. Victor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Most outstanding!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Outstanding write on such a tough subject. Life does throw curves our way that in the end makes us appreciate what we do have. They say love is all we need, but in reality money does make the world go round. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write. Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
An outstanding write
Of a once upon a time
I can feel those moments
Been there myself
Peace be with you

Love & Peace
William


Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
This happens so often. Even the rich should realize that just a few twists of fate could leave them homeless too...

Chrissy

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Joyce, brings chills throughout out me, I can visualize every line in your writing. Many of us have faced these type hardships in our lives and wonder how we ever escaped to face a better day. I can't wait to read what happens? This kept me reading...and waiting...

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
What beautiful memories of the day you found
this foreclosure home now your
New home,This is a very beautiful
And a very emotional picture your words
Have painted for us to see and feel of this beautiful home
Where you now find yourself looking out from the inside
Congratulations on your beautiful home!!
Love And Peace to You Always Your Friend..Morning Star

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Thank you for the very well written and emotional poem Joyce.
Rusty

Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Wow, we dare only see such emotion when we're living it; sharing in familiar positions at different times. Some want to forget; while others see the handiwork of God even in the most trying of times. I totally understand; been there; thank God we don't have to do it again.
God Bless,
sharon

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
If many of us think about it, it probably would take just the loss of one income to put us all in such a position...I have been here, under certain other circumstances, but to lose your home is like a bird without a nest, especially in-waiting! But to find one that so perfect, and it is...
Love this write!
Love and peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Our family was a family in need,
And the little house was a house in need of a family.

It sounds like a match made in Heaven, Joyce.


Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Reminds of days of the Great Depression but any time one suffers the loss of their home and job is a Great Depression to them. God seems to always provide if you place your trust in Him and weather the storm as you have. Great write that others can relate to the anguish and almost hopelessness of the situation.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Very moving is so right...Hugsssssss

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Our history is such a rich tapestry of events, Joyce. The patterns change from year to year and their textures become the DNA of our lives. Thank you for sharing some of your most precious and difficult moments.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Joyce, this is such a moving account of a time in your life that it brought tears to my eyes. Humility and humbleness are reflected throughout, and you take me right into the yard so I'm looking toward that lonely little house that continues to stand while gentle needy people within must seek new horizons.

This happens often all over our country and you've written a classic to denote what it feels like. (Sad, but wonderfully written.)

Reviewed on January 21, 2007
The spirit of survival... very moving.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Blessed indeed. Miracles do happen..


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