WOW! Beautiful!! Your imagery is perfect and your words pen a story that keeps the readers attention. I truly look forward to reading more of your work.

Rene'

Fascinating fare, Miss Joyce!

I can't wait to observe... the untangling.

Wonderful piece, as always!

Love&Blessings, Rhonda

A lovely trip down memory lane ( even if it was a dream). I enjoyed the nostalgia,and images portrayed! GREAT WRITE...M

Indeed Joyce, memories can be most powerful. You have very effectively conveyed this fact within your verses here. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

"Mysterious findings
amid cobwebbed attics...
and the triggered scents of cherished times ignited."
Everytime I wash my wood floors with Murphy's oil soap it reminds me of the tack room where we would oil our saddles. I love the chore! It brings me back!
A wonderful write and I look forward to how your "Silent Webs" unfold...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

I alway enjoys reading your work, beautiful and nostalgic!
Sending all positive vibes your way as we shall all continue to partake of your pennings. Soon to partake of the lovely imageries and words your book awaits to share. Thank you for your concern, care, and support~Blessings!

Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn

excellent write Joyce. I enjoyed every word, you kept me courious to the end. Thanks
Rose

Great imagery and suspense!!! Great dream!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

outstanding write Joyce
beautiful imagery
Peace be with you

Love & Peace
William

It is funny how memories are triggered by the slightest little thing. I'm glad your dream became real and and I look forward to reading "Untangled Webs." Thanks for the adventure, Joyce.
~Butch Howard

Wow Joyce! This stimulated a few precious memories of my own. Thank you. :-)

OH, what a dream, what a poem. Excellent. Your words evoked a lot of feelings and memories. Liz

Stunning piece of work, Joyce; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

A beautiful poem. The wonders of
an old attic...ours was small.
I always wanted one in my house
never got it built though...;)
I do love the way you told the
story and enjoyed it very much.

Stunningly beautiful vision
Wow your words capture such vividness
I could almost see the doll of glass
With golden hair your imagery so
Beautiful theirs so many things in those attics
Treasures of all kinds such is memories!
Outstanding Job my friend!!
Love Peace and Joy to you always...Morning Star ( Yolie )

This is wonderful, I never had a attic, I was raised in log Cabins, so there was the nature, full of surprises, snakes, bees,spiders. Well done. Full of treasures. Sherry

Dusty attics truly hold many treasures, and this is a marvelous piece, Joyce. As a child, I loved our huge old attic, and I spent many happy hours up there. And very recently, as I cleaned up another dusty old attic, I found many treasures left by my father, and I will always cherish them.

I think ONE word carries this off, APPRECIATION!
YOur dreams Lady "J" that we get to take on with you, through your lift of wording so poetically, is IMPORTANT, in many ways and levels, some we still don't understand it's significance!
These will make a great historical "TREASURE BOOK" or Memory Book!
Thank you for sharing your heart, finding and Soul with us, as
OPEnLY as you do!
WArmest Blessings! and PEACE!
WArmly and with Much Love, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
A gem I will treasure, and I wish my dreams were this vivid and could be remembered! I will wish~! :) YOU! Keep dreaming lovely memorable dreams, to take us with you!

You do so much with memories. Make them come alive in the reader's mind. Thanks for sharing this one. Cheers

your story-telling abilities are vivid and quite effective ...

Joyce you have me glued to the words and I can't wait for the next part! You did this with great flair,and a knowing bent for mystery!
Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

love the storytelling nature of this piece

'You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one'

Wouldn't it be nice if we could invite a friend to join us in our dreams. Imagine awakening from a dream before it was finished but were able to ask our friend how it ended?

Regards
Dai

Like turning around and see yourself in the distance, looking back!
A delightful journey.
Georg

I have always liked poems that come unexpectedly...and with them bring memories of things long forgotten...this fine work of your illustrates that perfectly. What a grand stroll down memory lane this was!

You carried the reader up each step wondering what it was you were expecting to find and it was a delightful ending to your wonderful imagination.

This is really enjoyable. 'Tis true; Memories are the best thing I can remember! You are living a life that few can even imagine!! I'm glad for you! - Bill

Wonderfully written! I hope all your beautiful dreams do come true ... hugs

Excellent write, Joyce! The memory trail can trigger so many lost memories and make one feel all warm and fuzzy inside AND out! Good work!

George

The senses are keen in this peice. I smell, see, feel and hear the sounds in this space. I too have these senses, Sister of light.

Great poem very touching.

Wonderful nostalgic offering!!

Love Tinka

You have a way of drawing us in with whatever you write, keep writing and be blessed
God Bless
Michelle~

Indeed, whenever I smell lavender, takes me back to the 60's as a wee lad, and my grandpa..

A great write Joyce, I will be waiting for your untangled webs. I wish my dreams were this interesting...God Bless...JDM

A magical journey filled with wonder and mystery - reads almost like a Dickens composition. Well done!
Blessings ...
Richard

This is wonderful, Joyce!

Those who do not dream never have dreams come true. Wonderful write.
God Bless,
Lew

But it would have to happen and what an exhilerating time you will have in that attic. Memories are precious. Victor

Compelling story/ poem my friend, love Holly