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Breathe
by Janet E Hunt → (All Poetry by Janet E Hunt)
  
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We breathe alike
We laugh together, and, we enjoy hearing the other laugh
I sigh, and because I do,
You are delighted.
When I listen to your voice - when you talk...
You catch me sighing some more

...oh...

I'd like to catch your breath
Near my ear - I'd like to feel it
Wisp gently across my face
I'd like to breathe your breath,
Intimately

What is this about?
Neither of us knows
And both of us are afraid to think further
Because...because...

...oh...

We think on the same path
That we are similar
That you interest me
I spark you...

Somewhere there is a place
Sometime, I wish there could be
For us...
For you said once that I complete you
And that you’d like to complete me.

That doesn’t happen very often in life, you know.
What a shame it would be to waste that breath.


3/9/01


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 Reviews of "Breathe"
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on March 10, 2002
What a shame indeed... beautiful work.

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on March 9, 2002
Wonderful image of love....feeling the togetherness .....

Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2002
Then by all means don't waste that breath! You are right it doesn't come along often. Pretty piece Janet and go for it! Gregg

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2002
Sounds like love alright :)))

Reviewed by William Manchee
Reviewed on March 7, 2002
A great expression of love.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 7, 2002
Lovely...

Reviewed on March 7, 2002
There is a feeling of togetherness, and very innocently sweet love presented in this wonderful poem. I could almost hear those laughter and felt the joys within this poem when I read through this.

Great work Janet!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on March 7, 2002
Lovely poetry~what a shame it would be to waste such a breath~*


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