Slippery slope......... (poem) by Karen Palumbo on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 27, 2009

It would be wonderful to see people in America once more embracing activities that bond us - like block parties, town socials, and local charity. These are the type of things that can help us belong, so we become WE and not ME. Those feelings can spread quickly. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on August 30, 2007

Karen Bless you! can you enlarge this beautiful write and hang a big banner over the white house please! Ed said it < it's plain old selfishness, When the wagon trains rolled over the prairies to make this country everyone had to co-operate to get to where they were going, it was a different kind of self reliance, but I am afraid the guy with hired guns has won out in America, and it has become an accepted norm, to hell with the little Guy,and the sherif enforcing an aging moral code is one of the hired guns. My God when I learned about Amerika it was the Goal of every dreamin mortal, you can go back as far as you wanted, I could go on, but you said it all!
Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 25, 2007

Great write and photo as well, a powerful combination! A write and plea from the heart...things that are going on around our world are a bit scary...droughts in some areas, while flooding in others, all of the destruction from the tornadoes...it's hailed twice here in the past couple of weeks...seems as if nature is all mixed up...surely God will intervene and extend His hand of mercy...a touching write my friend, very powerful!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on June 23, 2007

Realistic write...I agree with you here...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

Your words -- and prayer -- ring with sincerity and caring, Karen. You're so right, of course, and I applaud you for this heart-felt out-cry.

thank you,
Gina

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

This is a compelling and sincere plea that can apply to the entire planet, Karen. You effectively tell the truth about the state of affairs. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre

Reviewed on June 22, 2007

That was a very touching and realistic poem. What will be leaving behind for our children? I shudder at the thought.

Hank

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 21, 2007

An excellent write Karen! Your message rings loud and clear across this vast country. America has changed, and its not for the best. The entire world seems to be on a down ward spiral. I pray for changes before its too late........M

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2007

Enjoyed very much,Hugs

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2007

Very good write Karen and very true. I wish desperately that we could all appreciate this beautiful world we live in but unfortunately some don't care. it breaks my heart to see desolation and poverty in affluent countries such as America and my country, England. It shouldn't be but it is. All we can do is do our little bit and keep writing about it! Peace and love to you, Theresa.

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on June 20, 2007

Karen,
This is a great write! We've done this to ourselves and I only hope God hears our prayers and helps heal this land.

Lovely,
George

Reviewed by jeanne watson

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

... Thank you for sharing your heartfelt plea of concern and hope. Many ... including myself ... feel the same concern and confusion.

...faith, forgiveness and fortitude, all a must in these trying times.

jeanne

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Amen Karen. I am praying with you. Our country needs to be restored. We need to return to our first love, God. Thanks for sharing and keep writing for God's glory. PB

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Very well express lament yes our country is falling
Apart and the world is chaotic
and no one really seem to care!
A very powerful poem whit a view of
your thoughts and concerns and prayers
Your a very gifted poetess that can
Get the point across with your magical penned
Such beautiful piece of art work both you and Robert!
Love Peace and Happiness to the both of you...Morning Star
Are a great team!

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

With poems like this, Once again the word will be mightier than the sword. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Heartfelt write and so much is true.

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Karen,
A tremendous lament AND POWERFUL EXPOSE` you have penned here!
A very apt photograph, Robert!

I will just say that ET's comment spoke the Truth, loud and clear!

And I shall boldy add: JESUS IS THE ANSWER TO EVERY QUESTION!

Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Shelly Davis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Your poem reminded me of mine. Thank you for your comment.
Yes, we live in a sad state. Our world is quickly falling apart.
This is an excellent poem Karen!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

The world is falling apart slowly but surely!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

God help us; too much apathy and chaos going on all over the world, even here in America. Powerful read, Karen; thanks for sharing your thoughts with us today! Very well penned; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :( >tears! <

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Karen,

On a slippery slope to hell....the whole nation is going down. Apathy and chaos rule the world; no one gives a damn anymore. The rich get richer, the poor get screwed again and again. Prices keep going up, paychecks getting smaller and smaller. Look at those poor folks in Haltom City and Gainsville, living in a flood plain because they can't afford to move anywhere else. They get it again...Haltom City just had tornadoes back in April, and now, the floods! When's it all going to get better? When is someone going to give a damn? Sorry, the news about the flooding hit me hard...I can't imagine losing everything. You've penned an eye opener, thought provoking write; well done; hope you're safe.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Country falling apart, decay all around.
it seems we are living on a slippery slope.

Sadly, I believe this is very true. And my eyes were really opened down in New Orleans. It's been almost two years since that tragedy, and far too many are still trying to rebuild their lives, yet we as a nation seem unable or unwilling to help them get the job done. I think we've become a very selfish society, and that to me, is very sad.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

It is so heartbreaking to think of the destruction and the prolonged suffering of our fellow man. You have captured it so well that it brought tears to my eyes.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

This country has always been a political one. In these days, the politicians have created a sink hole that has no latter. Dems, Repub., Independents? Just labels. All are for money, money and mo' money. They do not care a rats hiney about this land or her people. Some are made to follow the lines of the law, millions of others are allowed to break it. For? Money, Votes, face time on tv. This is not God's doing or undoing. It's man's refusal to utilize what God gave freely and strongly, free will to make the right choices. An inner moral pull to help and to ask for help without pride. This country has been taken advantage of by our own but mostly other countries. It's up to us to ban together and put a stop to it, but That will never happen. Nice poem Karen, got the passions in me flowing this morning!

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

Compassion & benevolence souls still to be found - Most people on this site would never allow sink-swim or drown - But an overcrowded planet has created this greed - For themselves they care only & witness those who would bleed - So gather the willing who have-not the fears - Possibilities are endless & your write helps though read with tears - {beautiful} Ted

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2007

ET has said it all..
Top notch of a penn...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 18, 2007

Splendid poem with compassionate sentiments. Your last verse, holds the key!. Not enough people want to learn or pray. If they did we wouldn't be in this condition. Humanity spends less time in prayer than in any other activity,yet they ask for so much!In most cases God only gets their attention when they want something.Sad, but true...

ET

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on June 18, 2007

A sign of things on the way
Watch and pray
Hope comes with a new day.
I read the concern in what you say.
DWB