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Subconscious
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They say the Sea has as many mysteries as space for us at present ... what of our own inner being, what lies beneath the surface of the average face you see on the street.


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“Deep within my soul lies a dark cavernous hole where my thoughts often wander amidst subterranean rain innermost wants desires feelings fall like subterranean rain.

Cold silver-sanded beaches stretch along distant unseen shores deep desires here may wander and are often seen no more Ill-considered follies’ deepest feelings; held at bay in the darkness here they frolic and like water babies’ play

Like innocents they play - swim the cool refreshing lake seek my fears to somehow slumber desires-thirst to somehow slake try to staunch incessant wanting assuage intermittent pain in the deep refreshing waters of subterranean rain

Disembodied dreams… lost wandering garish cold   hypothermic beings never living to grow old nor enduring through inception hardly feeling life or pain drowned at moment of conception in subterranean rain

Drowning feelings and perceptions in subterranean rain

Coldness like doom hunger-like pain no Sun’s warming light… suppressing subterranean rain”




Artwork Daibhidh MacAdhaimh

 
  
 
 
  
   
 

 


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 Reviews of "Subconscious"
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
A fan of Dais work am I.. This poem has such deep depth and concious lessons of the subconcious wonderful work A piece that could be read over and over to gleams each message within the seams of a perfect poem...

Blessings,
joselyn

Reviewed on March 15, 2007
Jeff,

Suddenly, there is a chill in the air: this one is powefully effective and vividly felt. I n c r e d i b l e lines. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 13, 2007
This is truly thought provoking and full of incredible imagery.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 12, 2007
wow deep with much feelings
(i love these kinds of poems)
dark images cold and wet
enjoyed!!

Reviewed on March 11, 2007
I often meander along a blank canvas in search of a sensation upon which to drop my intuitive anchor. My canvas only has the dark background painted. Submerged within this is my periodical frayed brush strokes of darker still pessimism. Occasionally, with brush in my other hand, a face appears that blossoms into optimism.

I had to walk alongside you here, Jeff.
David

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
thought provoking content and imagery successfully bring this poem into the surface of subconscious emotion, jeff ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
The imagery that you have chosen serves to emphasize the meaning of this write, Jeff. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on March 10, 2007
Jeff,
Subconscious is a thought provoking write.
Excellent!

Many blessings,
~Linda


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