Trixie, I feel the aloneness and pain in your words, truly powerful!
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Love, Sheila
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
The twisting and turning through the darkness of the mind and self. How deep and affecting, intense write:)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Big differenc betweem solitude and lonliness, this totally captivates the feeling, of this private hell..
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Loneliness can have an icy grip on our lives...yet where would the "art" be in "artist," or poet, if we did not experience this?
Your poem is an example of this.
Lonliness is hell for those who have to experience it on a daily basis; I am there at times myself; but I have my twin sister and my friends here to help me through! Excellent and powerful write; well done, Trixie!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
You have captured this well. Loneliness and fear can ruin a life if not dealt with.
peace and happiness
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2004
Trixie I really felt this...I just know your book has got to be wonderful...to survive such pain and be able to write about it...Good for you....I am proud of you...floria
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I enjoy your wonderful work
William
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Love, Sheila
Your poem is an example of this.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Love Tinka
~Chrissie
OH this is sagicexpression!!!
Excellent I can relate been
down this corridor before.
But then we
SAGIS are always bouncing back and
forth are we not ;)
HUGS love Ya sis
Excellent poem....
{{SAGI SIS PEG}}}}
peace and happiness
Jill :)
and conceptual poem
that someone could be
right next to us
thinking into loneliness
thanks,
d.