Trixie....my friend...such a lovely write....cheers...love n luck...you know how to move heart...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
Trixie you've outdone yourself with this piece..glorious work..ty
Vesna ooxxo
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
REally moved me..the poem, the music..that name is so fitting..for this wonderful piece!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
The one thing that is certain about life Trixie...is that
nothing ever reamains the same...it is forever changing..
and sometimes those changes are hard to accept....lovely
writing..floria
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
A moving, yearning write!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2004
It's simply wonderful to read your work Trixie....
Very beautiful deep heartfelt write Trixie. Love to you dear heart!
Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2004
Oh Trix, this had such a soft magnificient message to it, tht willingness to j ust move on, it was really touching, stunningly sweet, and briefly spoken, had sting, ty al
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
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a hint of hope
still left
it's all i have to hold on
fading slipping fast
i will move on
as you can see touched me deep
great job
Vesna ooxxo
nothing ever reamains the same...it is forever changing..
and sometimes those changes are hard to accept....lovely
writing..floria
A sweet write.
Peace
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~