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Salty Teardrops
by Morning Star → (All Poetry by Morning Star)
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  On a  snowy wintery day you captured my heart,
You embedded your finger prints on my soul,
Took possession of my life.
Many moons passed by
One cold winter night you picked up your boots
Rounded up your possessions and
.....................Broke my heart.


Left me crying salty teardrops,
In the bed we once shared
Now filled with gloom
....................Of solitude.

 

I lay night after night drowning in a pool of loneliness
With your photograph laying next to me,
Breathing your scent that penetrated my
Pillow dreams
Eons pass when you kissed my salty
Teardrops,

Wrapped my heart with your tender touch kept me warm.
I felt so safe cuddled in your arms
You always kissed my
....................Blues away

 

Now my pillow is filled with emptiness
Lost in dreams I look for you
I call out your name
I hear your voice can’t see your face my tears
Can’t touch your heart, she’s turned it into

....................Stone.

 

Lost in dreams I wiped my tears with your old t-shirt
You left behind, you were my breath
You were my life.
In dreams I cry can’t find the light only images
Within the mirror of my mind casting a
Reflection of you, cuddled up keeping her safe
In your embrace while
Kissing her salty teardrops and chasing
....................Her blues away

 

My eyes behold sweet memories of times far behind
Deep in the corridor of my dreams
My love I gave to you my salty teardrops and within a
Farewell kiss,

As I lay and weep myself to sleep
I dreamt my soul will never be free.

Good night my love……..

 

 

 

Copyright by Yolanda Hernandez

Aka Morning Star June, 14,204

 

 Authors Note: I was feeling really hurt words just began to flow!!
I want to thank you for reading my thoughts which come from heart
And the depths of my soul

Wishing You Peace Love and Light....

 


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 Reviews of "Salty Teardrops"
Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack
Reviewed on January 7, 2018
Lost love hurts. You expressed this very well. Good job.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 27, 2011
LOST LOVE...THE PALPATION OF THIS POET'S SHARING...WRENCHES THE HEART, MIND SOUL AND BODY...'WRINGS' IT, UNTIL AT LAST THE BLESSED RELIEF OF...SALTY TEARDROPS...AND THEN...THE HEALING BEGINS. THE IMAGERY IN THE WORK IS VIVID WITH PHRASES THAT SUPPORT THE THEME SOLIDLY. GREAT WORK AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
An awesome write Jolie
Composed to perfection
as one longs for a lost loved one
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 18, 2011
Your verses reach deeply into my soul and awaken strong emotions, Yolie. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on October 17, 2011
The anguish is palpable, Yolie, and so keenly felt. The depths of pain breaks the heart. Your "hurt words" truly did flow. Beautifully done, although heartbreaking. ~Hugs, Lizzie

Reviewed by Debbie Lacy
Reviewed on October 17, 2011
What a beautiful poem! So romantic, so sensual and full of passion of one's lost love! The loniness & emptiness you conveyed in each phrase was so heart felt and I loved it! Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem Morning Star! :) Peace and blessings to you.

Debbie

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 17, 2011
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!! VERY TALENTED, VERY ROMANTIC!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 16, 2011
Yolie,
This is stunning poetry, so filled with heart stopping lines of sadness and lost passion..Ooh soothe my tender heart, you know how to make me cry salty teardrops...Amazing as always...

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 16, 2011
Sometimes one can feel down about a love that never was to be.
But, soon we move on and realise we are free and happy.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 16, 2011
Awesome. Love it. Liz


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