I think the trick to this is keeping your balance. It isn't essy unless you have confidence either. I always love your pens...they are sooooo moi!
Love,
Susan
Judging by the comments below, looks like it is a cost quite a few are willing to, even temporarily, forfeit! :)) Ah, the heady intoxication of the Secret of Flight... even if it is proven to be all fancy. Your form definitely points up the downside of this lovin rollercoaster ride, but the sentiments speak of all the Hollywood Great Romances, which make for all the drama and adrenalin flow. Tis a tightrope-walk, tis so true - between risk and dare; challenge and conquest; right and wrong: it puts me in mind, topically, just at the moment, of the harrowing story of Johnny Cash and June Carter in "Walk The Line". Your short lines and exciting imagery are just right to create that thrill of "all the fun of the fair" that is the common experience of the bloodrush of love. Very well done. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on August 4, 2006
Oh this is good!...very,very good! What a fabulously clever close to a poem full of wonderful imagery and diversity. Loved it Eileen! Love Panda :)
100's and 100's of ways,
and I'd just as soon spend my days;
doin just that,wherever love goes
there is a cost,
but oh so much cheaper than,
all that time mopin,I,
woulda lost.
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love, B&R
The format reminded me of reading words on a hose.
Good thoughts here, penned with "curious" expertise dear one.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Great poem...
Myrna
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reminded me of that glorious Paul Simon's Classic " Fifty Ways to Lose your Lover "...
I felt like I was tumbling reading your downward spiral of words..
Amazing format
Love and Prayers
Peter
Love,
Susan
Elizabeth
to lose yourself without getting lost! Excellent.
Be well,
Penny
It is when you are done experiencing life and grow complacent that one begins to age and thus begins to die
Love Tinka :)
and I'd just as soon spend my days;
doin just that,wherever love goes
there is a cost,
but oh so much cheaper than,
all that time mopin,I,
woulda lost.