Adrift on a sea of dreams longing for fulfillment the echoes of memory filter down into the water slowly blends in the wake of my lonely desire
Feeling only half alive as the winds of whimsy blows my heart to the seven seas of misery while my love screams to be found and set free
Waters of the vast ocean hear this anguished cry I'm filled with such devotion without him I will die unleash his locked emotions so to me he can fly
Use your magic on his heart so his love can grow let him know we cannot part we're cast as one show we were destined from the start we share the same echo
Oh my God
it hurts reading this........such pain, anguish and yearning
oh ET, echos are emptyness and need to dim
otherwise they can drive you insane
your poem is beautiful.........but its a punch in the gut.........
Must be a woman thing..............
aghhh........so sad, yet beautifully stated.....
hugs........pax A
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
A bit of yearning, contemplating and wishing is imbedded within the verses . . . Good, but of course . . .
Beautiful, haunting reflections of love and yearning, Eileen. I enjoyed this poem very much -- what an incredible image of the spit of land and the lighthouse!
Love,
CJ
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Best wishes always
from
Kay
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(((((A Fantiastic write)))))
I love the scenery within your
posted photo
Your wording is brilliant
love & Peace
William
Myrna
it hurts reading this........such pain, anguish and yearning
oh ET, echos are emptyness and need to dim
otherwise they can drive you insane
your poem is beautiful.........but its a punch in the gut.........
Must be a woman thing..............
aghhh........so sad, yet beautifully stated.....
hugs........pax A
Beautifull
Truly beautiful, the sentiment rekindling romantic fires within
Well Done
Richard
Love,
CJ
Has a reverberating beat of love to it..
Awesome
Love
Peter
I really like this Sis!
Susan
Ron
Micke
Peace & Love,
Dove
Rusty