There's a wondrous refuge for lovers seeking to be free out from under the deluge of those who are contrary the map's not hard to find that will get us to the place of what we left behind in times worldly rat race if we will cling together never let the outside in ignore the stormy weather trust the spirit that's within oh what joy can be obtained when bound love is let loose we won't keep it contained only fools give it a noose let our joyful journey begin as we travel to our new lair fever raising under our skin so happy we're almost there
and let the noose be damned! love the spirited tone of this exquisitly fevered capture. so very well expressed, eileen. always enjoy reading your creations.
peace unto you, poetess,
carolyn
There is a fine line between completely captivated and feeling trapped and you have woven through it quite well, Eileen. Lovely poetry.
Take care,
Sherry
A liberal lady priest-friend of mine, who would greatly love to start a church for the more "artistically inclined", loves to cite the words of a wonderful aged spinster missionary, framed forever in her mind as saying "It is the poets and lovers who get there first". Amen to that! Only the poets and the lovers have half a clue what God's purposes are all about. But I think this poem of yours here demonstrates that you are all three: a poet, a lover and one who is fully au fait with God's purposes! Timeless beauty and truth released through your words here. Passion of whatever nature excites amazing fortitude and positivity. TY Kate xx
How can one flee from the angel of love. They will carry it no matter where their hearts lie.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Dear Eileen,
When you write about Love, it's like a map for others to joyfully follow.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
It is so important for lovers, couples to be alone free of the outside world to nuture their love. Beautiful reminder. Love is the greatest gift in all forms and levels of it.
Peace,
Joselyn
Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Often times couples do not make the time to 'run away' some good adise in this poem is fun to read.
“Being a couple yet free is our next challenge on the evolutionary ladder. This book successfully helps us unravel the myths that block that achievement. It does it with warmth, with readability, and with balance. It recreates everyday problems and
Always great poems to read and this is one of the best.
DWB
Ron
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
You are poetry; you are romance; you are inspiration at its best. This is glorious!! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
when bound love is let loose
we won't keep it contained
only fools give it a noose
Joyous, Indeed!
peace unto you, poetess,
carolyn
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Take care,
Sherry
Love,
Susan
Peace. Joyce
Just passion and a lot of it.I liked this write.
Michael
Love,
CJ
blessings to you and this excellent poem.
When you write about Love, it's like a map for others to joyfully follow.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Peace,
Joselyn
debra