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Eye Games (Josephs apostle style
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just trying out Joseph's style not about me;-)

Josephs new apostle style
4 lines 3 syllables each
2nd and 4th lines rhyme


~*~
he enticed
me with eyes
that caught me
by surprise


I looked back
with a smile
knowing I
could beguile


but his look
became cool
made me feel
like a fool


I then tried
to show him
it was not
just a whim


his eyes down
turned away
the game ends
with no play


etw-2007


 


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 Reviews of "Eye Games (Josephs apostle style"
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Interesting format. I like its flow.

Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
The coy and the coy-less, never hurts to try does it? As always a super masterpiece....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Very unique style I loved it
And I am going to try to write one!
Very imaginative creation!
Love Peace and hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Blighter....

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Dear Eileen,

I am honoured by your apostles chain. You are creative and clever.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Ingenious Sugar chum, and the subject matter has flowing continuity. You adapt to different forms so easily it seems. This was very good! Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Pretty cool in any form.

Walt

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Great writing Eileen...enjoyed the new style, will have to try my hand at it also...
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Great job sweet lady,enjoyed..stay safe and well..Hugsssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
Quite an Apostle Chain, Tiger Lily!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
clever use of the form

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
You excel at any format.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Sounds like you're getting it pretty good Eileen. I've learned to stick with what I do well. Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Sound to me like you got a little bit offsides and you know, if you cheat, the result can be dangerous, if not downright humiliating . . . LOL . . . Just having some fun, Eileen . . . Nicely done . . .

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
well done! yoou wrote in this style beautifully

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
an excellent capture of style and motif ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Great job, I loved this..I am going to try and write one of these..thanks to Joseph for introducing this style to us.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Definitely his loss! Heartwrenching write, Eileen!

Love,
annie


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