When we know he's out there and we sense every nuance of his emotions, spirit and heart and we can't put a face on this love but we know we'll know him when he comes for us...then the realy trials begin.
Eileen, perhaps it's my mind set, but this poem reminds me of God. I could be horribly mistaken. Yet, it speaks to my heart about the mysteries of Him.
You're expecting Santa Claus, have you really been a good girl, let us know what he brought for a present will ya. A great write with much inuendo, and dripping metaphors, enjoyed much, also the opening with such an eye catching picture. Lots of Blessings! Jasmin Horst
Sounds like a man of powerful traits,,of thunder and beauty, no doubt compelling. The image is gorgeous!
Love, Christine
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
Oooh! I LIKE it when the cosmos tempts you into putting out your excellant version of the exotic . . . There are so many intriguing lines, almost every one . . . Smile . . . Ya did good, hon . . .
You know I love it when you write of storm: the power, the passion you capture!!!!! Whew. Gonna need a cold chower after this one...well done, wish I'd written it! A StormSpinner type of write, for sure.
(((HUGS))), love and Merry Christmas,
Karla.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
And after such a storm, we are left with the wondrous masterpiece as is seen in the photo. Your poem is bursting with passion, dear Eileen.
Sixty-seven days after departing Flores Island in Europe’s westernmost waters, the schooner Heimdall and her stalwart crew has finally arrived at the mysterious Isla Socorro in the Revillagigedo Archipelagoes. The discoveries they make are astounding
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Beautiful both your words and this amazing photo..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Excellent!
Love,
Becca~
Walt
Love,
Susan
Be safe,
Karen
God bless you. Kathy
Love Tinka
Peace for the season and the coming year.
Dan
Merry CHRISTmas to you and yours!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Love, Christine
You know I love it when you write of storm: the power, the passion you capture!!!!! Whew. Gonna need a cold chower after this one...well done, wish I'd written it! A StormSpinner type of write, for sure.
(((HUGS))), love and Merry Christmas,
Karla.
Love, joy & peace,
Joseph
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Quite a captivating poem, Tiger Lily, and quite an intriguing Mystery Man.