SOS!!! (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 6, 2008

I was there recently myself and you express it perfectly.
You have touched me deeply with this poem.
Hugs and love
from
Kay

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 4, 2008

Deep and feeling a great need!
Try something new
it might put what is ahead of you askew
My thoughts are with you ET
Write On
STay Positive and in the some light!
Warmest Blessings and Warm Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady Sheooxoo

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Perfect description of a nightmare.

Ron

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

Your poem sounds like a cry from another dimension..You must find lightness and sunshine to bring you out of this darkness. We have all been here many times as a matter of fact..It's always a battle between lightness and darkness..The lightness will prevail..
A very gripping poem ET.
Peace, love, and lightness of soul and body and mind...
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 3, 2008

I've been on that journey and was finally able to find a safe haven. A touching soulful write!.........M

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

a beautiful and haunting write!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

to lose the soul would be a night mare,, well done Eileen ,
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

I'm sure glad I noticed the "just a poem;-)"; you would have had me worried when reading your SOS! Thoughtful poem; do we sometimes feel this way,too? Another excellent poem, Eileen!

Micke

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Oh this tells the story and I guess
one can only hope the SOS will be
received and answered. There's a
great message here, Eileen!

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Give in Eileen, let nature take its course, fighting it only encourages more of the same, Ditto: George, enjoy the high and low of the waves while reaching new destinations. Blessings! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

In the end there is salvation and forgiveness. The Phantom shall be banished, the heart and soul triumphant when they repent, open up to receive heavenly love. This poem is a little scary. This poem is also very well written as per usual. As I say in one of my poems, " let your poetry sock it to me". Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Oh my,wonderful writing sweet lady,you take care Ok..going out of town on business ,see ya soon...Hugssss

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Eileen, glad this is only a poem, but wow, your muse is on a ROLL!! Excellent write yet again; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Glad to hear it's just a poem, but it's a good one.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

A mayday will suffice any time, but...when caught in a never ending maelstrom, lie back and let the waves take you to where you are supposed to be.

Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 2, 2008

Well Penned Eileen
Peace & love be with you

William

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

I like just a poem
Love ya
Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

To me, this speaks of unrequited love and the hold that this has over a person. Perhaps, I should have a glass of wine. lol

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

Powerfully penned, a little terrifying--are you okay? (((HUGS))), love and prayers, Eileen.

Karla.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on February 1, 2008

If we all were smart we'd all be sending out an SOS..or SOW..Save Our World.

I love your heart and compassion. Wish there were a way to have everyone be as you!

Love and blessings!
Susan