Today the youth are so uncouth
Having porn with their popcorn
They've hardly left their cradle song
It's sad that we can't right this wrong
Teens are always starting trends
Breaking new ground with friends
But pre-teens shouldn't be so free
They need somone to oversee
It's not smart to grow up too fast
You can't get back what's lost to the past
If only youth knew to act their age
For they can never relive that page
We learn these things too late in life
Then we try to save youth some strife
We can only hope that perhaps a few
Will find themselves better things to do
There seems to be no simple solution
No wonder vaccine to avoid delusion
For youth will always eschew advice
Til it's their turn to give it, then they
think twice.
WOW I knew it! ! ! but I couldn't find the words, YES! ! ! they are become older younger and younger making the parents kind of ignoramus of what is going on in the world...
Great! ! !
Bottom Line - Satan wants innocent children.
The younger he can get to them the harder their hearts get.
Disease, abortions, drug abuse etc etc.
No examples to look up to.
It's gotten so out of control, I don't know where to start.
They ridicule God's son,
Yet I think he's the only one who change mens thoughts about whats
right and whats right. And that usually comed in the form of suffering.
But all is not lost, the godly wil get Godlyer and lost will be blinded to thr truth.
Doug
i see this as a teacher of pre-teens--so much bombards them from all angles enticing them with maturity served up and pushed at them on a silver plater with a rare few who attempt to lend sanity
Excellent speak-out, Eileen...a topic that needs many commentaries! I just don't understand where the parents are in these matters. I mean, aren't they paying the bills? But I think the training needs to begin with toddlers...who's the parent and who's the child! Clothes, TVs, cell-phones, expensive games are not good alternatives for quality time with children...
Save the children from the adult...
I am reminded of the lyrics to an old song that very wisely proclaims, " by the time we set sail, lifes half over". If we could only get that message across to the pre-teens and teens. I believe they would gladly linger in the beauty and innocence of their youth. Your poem carries a very important message we should all attempt to convey to youth. Jon Michael Willey
Profound social ponderings... "They Get Old Younger and Younger" bears the light of wisdom, and is very rich in contents ~ delivering a message of global responsiility.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Excellent writing sweet lady,stay safe and well...Hugs
OMG!!
That Picture Says It All!
The Net, The TV Commercials, The Cable Stations....The Radio, The Music....how long is this endless list of influence-Absurdly Long.
I am appalled by the sexual influence in toys even-Yeah Toys!! Little girls Bathing Suits Made sheer as Ladies lingerie (get it wet it is)
Pedophiles & Perverts.... I Get Outspoken On All These issues that affect our girls. It's not their fault. They are numb to what we mean sometimes, Your right they NEED to be overseen.
Great Write Eileen & That Picture.....just heartbreaking
Things change and yet they remain the same. Seems I remember this when my older siblings were growing up with Elvis and I lived through the Hippie days. Somehow we survive. Nice write Eileen and yes, so true.
gosh,, it is all too much, I will never forget when I went to my daughters 6th grade conferences and there were notices for parents that many of the children were already having sex,, My mouth dropped,,,just crazy. and that was 10 years ago.
Funny how age makes us see clearer. I think it was Homer who wrote first of the lost innocence of youth. It is a two-edged sword. We want our kids to run worry free and do kid things and still have the presence to detect predators. You are right, though. Too many parents use their kids to live out fantasies rather than allow them the opportunity to be children.
Good rhyming poem with a needed message BUT one disagreement: can you blame kids - it's more their parents and the media's fault. Because Americans have become a teenage-idol culture in music, TV, movies and models. Go in any clothing store and you'll see pre-teens in all the ads made out with makeup to look like alluring older woman (to Sell!) And ever since the Britany's and others this society holds out all these award$ if they'll just DO IT! No paying dues anymore just "see how talented my kid is" - cynical but true.
Thoughtful write.
A lot of truth in this, though I must say that those who are yet too young to make choices for themselves (if that age still exists!) are often dressed as mini-sirens whilst still in nappies by their yummy-mummies. And don't we just oo and goo at the baby fashions we can purchase for our latest new addition and the cuteness of it all? The doublemindedness starts with fashion-conscious friends and family members, too, I think. Is any of us immune? Which of our children still welcome hand-knitted baby bonnets, lovingly crafted by the knitters in the family? To our cost, sadly. Label-awareness is a devastating part of our overblown consumerist society... so much for choice. Who has the choice to opt out... yeah, right, and pay the price of social exclusion. What kid wants that? A total can of worms that, as ever, you put your very deft finger on. TY Kate xx
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
A fine poem Eileen that clearly states how terribly wrong this world has become and how our pre-teens are suffering, striving to look and do their best, like little tv porn stars. Blessings, Holly
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
I decided with my two almost grown now, not
to have cable, or internet service for them.
My kids don't miss it because they've never had
it here at home.
Sure, I let them do reserch on my internet, but
we have always kept a close eye.
I don't understand all the tatoo mess. It is so
cheap looking and something that is just not took off.
I agree with you 100% Eileen..
with love,
Ron
The spread of sexual diseases has now infected many girls and boys in ages 14 to 19 teen and the numbers keep going up. You always bring these problems to the forefront, and rightly so, as it has gotten out of hand and these kids seem to ignore the consequences of their actions. Bravo Eileen
Well said, don't give up on them. They are trying their wings and they are getting them singed. They will learn eventually but at a such a high price. All we can do, is be there when they fall to help them up again and hope they learned. Job well done my friend. Food for thought. Love, Bonnie
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
I read you every day, sweetie, but felt I should comment on this one. You are so right. At MySpace it has been a struggle to keep the porn off my page, and a good deal of the porn and smut is on authors websites. I guess they think if they write romance, they should show T & A to be sophisticated. Bah. Think? I don't think thinking is a priority these days. And what about the commercials that are pumped into every home. Nothing is sacred any more. Kids have to grow up much too fast these days. Keep telling it like it is.
Love,
Bette
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
You know that I am not prude, but I couldn't agree with you any stronger. Gone are the days of wonder and mystique of the opposite sex . . . And the fumbling in dark places trying to cop a feel . . . Nowadays, more than likely, it is the girls who make the move on boys . . . You were always just a little ahead of us when it came to that kind of stuff, but now it is completely out of hand . . . Guys lined up IN CLASSROOM for oral sex gangbang in the eighth grade no less . . . The teacher I think was in the damn room but was afraid to say anything . . .
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Great! ! !
Georg
The younger he can get to them the harder their hearts get.
Disease, abortions, drug abuse etc etc.
No examples to look up to.
It's gotten so out of control, I don't know where to start.
They ridicule God's son,
Yet I think he's the only one who change mens thoughts about whats
right and whats right. And that usually comed in the form of suffering.
But all is not lost, the godly wil get Godlyer and lost will be blinded to thr truth.
Doug
Save the children from the adult...
Micke
Profound social ponderings... "They Get Old Younger and Younger" bears the light of wisdom, and is very rich in contents ~ delivering a message of global responsiility.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
That Picture Says It All!
The Net, The TV Commercials, The Cable Stations....The Radio, The Music....how long is this endless list of influence-Absurdly Long.
I am appalled by the sexual influence in toys even-Yeah Toys!! Little girls Bathing Suits Made sheer as Ladies lingerie (get it wet it is)
Pedophiles & Perverts.... I Get Outspoken On All These issues that affect our girls. It's not their fault. They are numb to what we mean sometimes, Your right they NEED to be overseen.
Great Write Eileen & That Picture.....just heartbreaking
Embrasse'
Vickie
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Ron
Thoughtful write.
Jasmin Horst
to have cable, or internet service for them.
My kids don't miss it because they've never had
it here at home.
Sure, I let them do reserch on my internet, but
we have always kept a close eye.
I don't understand all the tatoo mess. It is so
cheap looking and something that is just not took off.
I agree with you 100% Eileen..
with love,
Ron
Love,
Bette