You flow through me like
the rhythm of the night
bringing on the melody
of delight, as I wander
in my dream dance of
phantom romance still
swaying in sync while
you embrace all of my
being in a divine caress
as you press my flesh
into the exotic sounds
of erotic love that flows
through bongo drums
and hums into all those
parts that shiver with
desire of the fire aflame
within your fingers that
entice the music to match
the needs of my hips as
they whip you into a frenzy
of play which doesn't end
until the light of day~Olay!
"the needs of my hips, as they whip you into a frenzy" -- this, is passion! -- reminiscent of an old song that states, "gonna find me a restless woman, with razor blades and dice in her eyes, just a touch on sadness in her fingers, and thunder and lightning in her thighs" -- Olay, Eileen -- another piece of fine romantic poetry -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW
Oh yeah... can't beat Santana!
Good stuff.
Love,
Becca~
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 21, 2008
Your lovely and romantic, not to mention lustful desires, is a work in perfection, just as the "Fantasy Dance" was in real-time . . . Well done . . . Look out all you ladies of sensual poetry . . . Eileen is making her mark . . .
All came together in perfect harmony, the rhythm, dance, words, and your inner fire, the song of a siren, singing with the depths of longing and knowing fulfillment, and the perfect beauty that you are,
the seven veils in flying colours, a perfect poem of lust and desire!
p.s. the picture match is perfect, besides I love the belly dance, it is one of the most sensues that I know of.
Hugs Tiger Lily! Jasmin Horst
Good stuff.
Love,
Becca~
the seven veils in flying colours, a perfect poem of lust and desire!
p.s. the picture match is perfect, besides I love the belly dance, it is one of the most sensues that I know of.
Hugs Tiger Lily! Jasmin Horst
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Newfie hugs, Rose
Georg
for sure...a dance into Oblivion...
nice work...
"You flow through me like
the rhythm of the night
bringing on the melody
of delight . . . "
Fantastic opening to this sensual poem - your pen is on fire!!
Hugs and love,
Lance