Valentine Lost (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

When love hits, it's hard not to become completely embroiled. We tend to forget who we are for a time. When it's gone, we have to search for ourselves again. A sad write.
Sheila

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 10, 2009

A true Humpty-Dumpty write...a shattered soul.
Cryssa

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

better to have lost than to have never known, you may find it once again ...

Reviewed by William Potter

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

(I feel you in my bones,they don't like
being alone)
Sad, but so well done. I will remember this line and this poem for some time.

take care,

William

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

I like the artistic "jarring" of rhyme and line-ends in the final stanza, Eileen, so as to create the kind of effect you speak about. You are gifted at effortless-seeming verses, where your flow is so thoughtfully conversational and yet you craft with precision. Yes, guess there ARE two sides to the Valentine heart, and you paint its sorrowing, raw and bleeding side well. Kate xx

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

So sad, Eileen, please don't be shattered, know
how you feel, am sending you positive thoughts.
Hugs
Dale

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

Eileen~!

I feel for you . . . beautifully expressed!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

Powerful writing, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

People who do that to others don't care what they do, love is hard to find and even harder to lose...e

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

Powerful write Eileen for it hits the hearts of all who lost in love...which is about everyone...we just have to pick ourselves up, dust ourselves off, and dive in again...Great write...love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

Eileen ~ Of course it matters, I pray your heart is mending as we speak. It is never easy to lose a love that felt like the one. Be Well. Carin'

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

POWERFULLY penned sadness, Eileen, very well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

well expressed poem of broken love

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 9, 2009

So sad Eileen but very well written. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose