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The Agoraphobic Artist
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- She cannot always be there for him -


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"To unlock the box
was not an easy task..."

She found him
in some sort of coffin,
a popular eighteenth century object,
probably from Taïwan,
made of crushed oysters.

The agoraphobic artist lay in it,
- motionless -
although he spoke a lot
of things he could not see.

He wasn't born blind,
he just lost his eyes.
He wasn't born deaf,
but he conjured up
injuries and meningitis,
yellow and scarlet fever,
asking her in strange ways
to research and deliver.

Despite his loss of function
- or feeling -
for reasons she ignored,
he tried to keep her near,
begging, urging,
then screaming.

Was he unaware of
her claustrophobic nature?

Still, she tried to aid,
and late one night,
under a new moon,
she opened the lid
and pulled him out.

Covered in cold sweat,
shaking like a lamb,
a newborn in a candlelit garden,
he took his first, deep breath.

She watched him crawl in pain,
then take trembling steps outside,
fighting memories of paralysis
and crying like a child.

Now, she couldn't help him more,
she had her life to live,
her skin, arms and bones,
an eyeful of dreams to fulfill.

"She unlocked the box,
not an easy task,
to help the re-birth of a man
left there to grow,
in freedom and art."

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 Reviews of "The Agoraphobic Artist"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 17, 2007
as with life, this is her job
Outstanding poetry, remarkable in all it's rawness and beauty
so glad i found you today

Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
a pandora.esque conundrum. . .you always have a rawness, a sur.realness to your words that drift in and out of consciousness. . .. quite the beautiful dream you weave.
ness

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 16, 2007
Axilea,

Sometimes there's only so much one can do or want to do. If Pandora be more comfortable within then let her be. Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Saberi Roy
Reviewed on October 15, 2007
your mind travels into dark places Axilea, the idea of opening a box is trying to unravel the hidden and this one is very interesting.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
now, he just needs to be nurtured and nourished and perhaps he'll outgrow himself ...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Considering the pretense and climate in our global societies, I would imagine that most people would, at one time or another, entertain extraordinary fears of public places, and also be numbed by the fear of rejection by peers and those instrumental in keeping the garden of our art fertilized.

Your insights are personal and articulate Axilea; I percieve that they are derived from the personal suffering that you have endured, coupled seamlessly with your undeniable love of words, and the fervent desire to enlighten and entertain readers with your poetic insights. To these ends you have done so with this reader with a great amount of panache!

Blessings of Light and Wisdom ...
Richard

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 14, 2007
Axilea, this is incredible--all this about giving birth to a man--first steps--dark womb. It's beautiful.--Charlie


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