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Misplaced
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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A piece of narrative prose-poetry - she is misplaced and certainly misunderstood -

Damp walls and a smell of mushrooms,
an oil lamp's uncertain flame,
suddenly hushed by the rain.

There, she dwells and dreams.
until she's ready to create,
giving birth to ideas
that she feeds - just like children -
and then leads to the world outside.

She knows nature
because she lives with it,
observing
as much as she is observed:
it's part of her pact.

She wasn't born this way,
but solitude is now
the only friend she trusts
.

Alone, she finds remedies
from flowers and plants,
roots and barks,
treasured to make tinctures
in solutions of grape alcohol.

But if you meet her
at daylight,
be ready for a fright -
if your head is as full of prejudice,
as her life is rich with experience -.

You may be scared by the scars
on her skin -
creased like old papyrus -
they are the writing
that show her suffering and abuse.

An outcast, she was punished,
for disobeying the laws of men.
She knew she had a mission,
meditating and healing
to master the forces within.

Years ago, she was beaten
by those - sick with bigotry and hatred -
who left her half-dead.

So many miles from home,
in the dark forest,
- a witch or a martyr? -
she managed to stay alive.

Today many people come
from faraway villages,
with their luggage made of pain,
to be cured, body and soul.

In the heart of the laws of nature
she no longer feels misplaced.


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 Reviews of "Misplaced"
Reviewed by Tony Jenkins
Reviewed on August 1, 2008
Misunderstood ! not by all.

Thank you.

Tony

Reviewed by tammy mcglade
Reviewed on November 16, 2007
so very wonderfully written. You can feel how she is an outcast. great work

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
This reminds me of one of my favorite novels: The Witch of Blackbird Pond, wherein a Quaker woman is ostracized because of her beliefs. She lives alone in a shack down in the meadow. She makes yarn from her goats--dyes the wool, and has herbs for healing. In this book however, it is a young girl (Kit) who finds her place in society because of such a woman. --And that wisp of my soul in Tacna becons me at times with the scent of herbs from an open market. Tell them your ails, and they'll dole out the herb to cure you -- think I need some mint tonight -- a bit of a cold coming on, and it soothes an empty stomach so... --Charlie

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
This is truly a very beautiful poem in it's own write! (right) I understand completely what you are saying here.
So many are misunderstood, but nature knows all and you cannot hide from Mother Nature..
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Misplaced by those who would crush her spirit, her will...misplaced by those who would extoll their power over Woman...tragic. Painfully penned reality for far too many, Axilea--well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Is a diamond misplaced,i think not,only undiscovered,but always the same value,found or unfound,covered over or in the light of day,or candle,your words sparkle,and resonate into the world,Axilea,
stan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
The plight of women who did not "tow the line" so to speak with the lines drawn, ususally by men of what is conventional and what is not has always been to say the least terrible. Today as in Salem witch hunts it is still not much improved.

Fee

Reviewed by Hira Sadhak
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
It is emotionally sensitive apoem which not only touches one,s heart but also create immense feeling for the author.Many in this world suffer and live with misplaced identity. Many thanks to author Axilea
Hira Sadhak

Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Salutations to all that may read these letters.

In a river that flows to the lake of humanity ~ knowledge mingles with sublimation and experience meets wisdom, ~ and all that seems to be MISPLACED comes to an artul order ~ and, as the close lines of
"Misplaced" states:
"In the heart of the laws of nature
she no longer feels misplaced".

"Misplaced" is a glowing page of literary brilliance.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Axilea,

Sometimes that which seems so isn't necessarily whom we are. Funny how being misplaced can so suddenly find direction. Your writing is always superb my friend and such a pleasure to read. Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
she is misplaced in the realm of those who placed her there, however within the scope of her world she is her own master and healer the natural world craves her coming. many thought provoking ideas come out of this write.

always,
randy


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