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Painted with Pain
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- the color of life? -

He looks at the world from above,
never feeling it
inside.

He lives with few words,
like bubbles,
traveling all the way up
to the surface:
universe - life
color - light.


Then, his glowing eyes meet
her sick grey skin,
her soul that's been searching
for air she can breathe
without burning.

She's a half hidden
sad, saturated
lizard of pain.

When he touches her
for the first time
he feels the damp, pleasureless world
of a house gecko:
fragile, yet aggressive,
attracted to the porch light
but spending most of her life
hiding until twilight.

And he wants to cover her pain
using paint made of his blood,
mixing hemoglobin
with a quick drying resin.

He tries hard
to stop the substance from decaying,
losing brilliance,
affecting other pigments around.

To seal his work
he covers it
with a fixative medium;
polymers, maybe,
used in flower arranging.

Today, she decorates the room,
trapped and motionless,
a flamboyant object.

And he's devastated by the knowledge
that life is not just color
and blood is not paint.


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 Reviews of "Painted with Pain"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 9, 2007
Your words touch the heart...you painted a very real picture of sadness.

Reviewed on December 2, 2007

Outstanding composition... "Painted with Pain" is what poetic excellence means.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on November 30, 2007
Oh! Wow! Your words have already said so much. There in infinitley deep metaphore here - suitable for much meditation.

Axilea, you have touched my heart with perfection. This is master-class work.

Keith

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
The effects of abuse pervade one's life, and changing one's life to one that is rich with color is not easy [but not impossible]. This reminds me of aspects of my life, and how it impacted those who reached out to me with love. Eventually, I worked through it, and happier, more 'colorful,' and so in love. Best wishes to you.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
A very in depth view of life...two sides to the philosophy of living....one who paints with pain and one who absorbs pain, there is still that finality to it all...

life is more than the color of pain...a small incision and a small drop of blood....tells us so...

nice work, Axilea...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Sad is the woman living in a coccoon of binding melancholy. You paint this figure well.
Susan

Reviewed on November 28, 2007
You paint a vivid picture of sadness, Axilea...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
You have breathed life into a painting of words,nice write,very nice,
stan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 28, 2007
Axilea again you use the things and life around us to blend the world of art, life and poetry into one breathing entity that almost jumps off the page to greet the reader. Lovely but sad as Charlie suggests.

Fee

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
And She's puzzled by the paradox
that Blood is knowledge
and that Life is a Colorful Paint
that you must Breathe to be aLive.

He dips Her into Life's pigment
till She starts breathing on Her own.
Then, with gentle hand,
He paints Himself with all her private, gorgeous colors.
Then He feels--
and then He Knows
Her World.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
To capture life takes more than static. Enjoyed


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