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Miss Yma
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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 I miss

the Mystery…

 

When People,

So obvious,

In noisy night traffic and alcohol,

Rule their descent

Stirred feelings

Mixed wheels

Of unfortunate emotions

Hustled in heat and rain

Dazed in nightlife haze

And brakes that break

The glass of a vivarium

Of simulated environmental conditions

Enough…

 

Until I shut my window

And sense my ecosystem

And pump up the volume

Of sober ascent

Vital unification

Blood and spirit

Printed in heaven

And cooling the earth

With magnetic magic

Sound

And I don’t just listen:

I open up

From a terrarium

Back to my freedom

- The wildest orchid

I am -

To the voice

Of Yma.


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 Reviews of "Miss Yma"
Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2008
"The Wildest Orchid I Am" -- Brilliantly portrayed as only you can do. Definitely one of the best on this den and a real treat to read and soak in your poetical essence. Well Done! Deborah

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
Strong and sure of where you are and what influences you the most. Not swayed by the obvious and easy to follow. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 19, 2008
Environmental conditions, not great around here, but hot one week, cool the next, no inbetween, a wild orchid must be nice and you are so nice, cheers to you and best wishes. Keep up the good writes, Lovely.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
It's like a whole different world when you close that window! I love how well you describe each environment - the feel, the sounds, the sights. The contrast here is fantastic! Love and Hugs.
Sheila

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 17, 2008
A strong and resolute declaration well expressed.
John

Reviewed by john salmon
Reviewed on June 17, 2008
Much enjoyed

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
hot as the poetess that wrote this

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
Exotic hot-house words like "vivarium" and "terrarium" set the mood and tone wonderfully for this piece, Axilea. Together with the picture, you have certainly whetted my appetite to catch the vibe of both the mystery and the voice. A far cry from the mean streets. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
I will read this many times, a gem of a poem! Thank you for sharing!

ET

Reviewed on June 16, 2008
Haunting! BRAVA, Axilea!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
Axilea,

The sounds are all together different when you live in the country but variety is the spice of life and still holds it's attraction. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
You held me from the very opening line. Beautiful, Axilea.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
When you said "...I shut my window," I threw mine wide open... you've captured a voice I've never heard before, and let me listen a bit through your lines. Bloom, you wild thing! Bloom on. --Charlie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
Oh this is fine poetry worthy of much more than a single reading, Axilea. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
Aixilea - I am assuming that Miss Yma is a singer;artist. I say artist
because of the last lines:

And I don’t just listen:

I open up

From a terrarium

Back to my freedom

- The wildest orchid

I am -

To the voice

Of Yma.

and that;s what artists do, help us transcendour "terrarium."

Reviewed on June 15, 2008
Axilea,

Haunting - beautiful lines - well done - the pic is gorgeous!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
a most unique voice indeed ...

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
very nice Axilea, I always enjoy your poetry.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
Captive images that keep the reader enthralled from start to finish...lovely Axilea.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by manny moreno
Reviewed on June 15, 2008
I found this poem interstingAxilea. Glad you are continuing to write.


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