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Tobacco Kid
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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You know, his angular chin stirs
my entangled feelings: some days
he’s a little window washer
in an imaginary rectangle,
something born in cinematic memoir.

He’s kittenish, swift
and, with a gesture just as quick,
is dismissed by the tanned back of a hand,
while the other rests on the leather clad wheel,
or by a complaining voice at the traffic light
in the sticky afternoon.

Framing the mind is absurd
yet there he is: a knock-kneed kid,
projected on the discolored wallpaper
of my etiolated memory.

Of him, there were barely a few photograms left in me,
until I met your Mediterranean skin and smile tonight,
to redeem the caramel and the ochre of life
and then the ever-summery smile,
finally merging margins,
when frames and screens disappeared.

In the old movie theatre,
you and I were sitting
almost back to back;
we chased the grey, so that
I could feel your silken warmth,
we talked, with sunkissed velvet hands,
inside that private art chapel.

And now, crazy horns and
Southern traffic, midday textures,
tobacco-eyed Marlboro kids
that call: “Uèè guagliò !!” ,
noisily take me back to the streets,
as I realize
I had never been that far,
after all.

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Tobacco Kid"
Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on August 31, 2011
Wonderful poem, Axilea. You can never go home, because you've never left.....

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 20, 2011
Oh this reminds me of the 1960's when as a teenager, I would go to the drive in movies with an "older" girl. Almost always back to back we talked with sunkissed velvet hands but the chapel wasn't so private. Patrick

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on August 18, 2011
Oh, I love it when you write this way, with a story and an image that just bores into our minds. What a photo! Your colors are brilliantly set against the grey backdrop of streets and black and white imagery. And again, I love the coming-full-circle feel of this. --Charlie

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 17, 2011
a journey that brings your back to where you really are ...

pure synaptic stimulation ...

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
from the shaky recollections of now metered memories there is deja vu in the streets of the eternal city --- Pauli intently interfering with intent stare and determined barker's skills, repulsive, creative an entrepreneurial little street brat -- how dare he remind you, cause you to relate to an encounter with love later in the evening -- my interpretation Axilea and I'll stick with it to the end -- too romantic for an aging romantic to abandon -- your canvas unfurled with gray and white allure on a crimson background -- bold, demanding interpretation -- I bid you love and peace my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Luca in 'Tea with Mussolini' comes to mind
as does 'Cinema Paradiso';
for me, Axilea, this has the light and shimmer
of Italy.
A fine evocation.

John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Of him, there were barely a few photograms left in me,
until I met your Mediterranean skin and smile tonight,
to redeem the caramel and the ochre of life

... totally delicious lines which turn sepia and grey into vivid emotional technicolour! Brilliant capture of a prior soul-to-soul impact raised from the shadows of long summers past. xx

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Admire this for so many many reasons, Axilea. Artistic
imagery; i.e.,

Framing the mind is absurd
yet there he is, a knock-kneed kid,
projected on the discolored wallpaper
of my etiolated memory.

-gene.


Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Your poetic voice has a wonderfully imaginative range, beautifully remarkable!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Taken back in time on more peacful days, this played out like a movie in my head..and gave me reason to ponder~

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Axilea, Memories and then realization, well done!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Branch Isole (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Pain and elation often battle for supremacy in the momentary memory of the mind as is described so well in this piece.

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Superb poetry.
Great storyline of looking back
Then to realize. . . . . .
Brilliant picture also.

db

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Sometimes memories have a tendency to give us a blurred remembrance that what was really there to remember. Somehow, I think this is one of those times. To be jolted out of your reverie by reality is a stunning and not a very likeable thing.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
Bravo.....love the texture of this one

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on August 16, 2011
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 15, 2011
Memories are such a wonderful collection to keep close to the heart as you have portrayed in this wonderful piece...

Be always safe,
Karen


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