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(Sleeping) Rooms
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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It’s late at night
there’s a flickering light
at her soul sill
/
blown out
not wanting to attract
dusty moths in search of light ;
intruders that look for warmth
to escape their frozen core
/
on a shelf
heavy books,
eyes forgotten between pages
permanent bookmarks
/
boudoir
colors and sigh(t)s,
her belongings
a protected sanctuary
/
bedroom
she is fighting sleep
until disarmed and drugged,
she falls captive
/
in deep red bed
receptive to dreams
of seagull tracks
on golden sand,
pictograms ;
of broken anchor
that rests on shore,
windy lullaby
/
morning
raindrops remind
of past mourning
/
then light

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "(Sleeping) Rooms"
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2011
I loved walking through this maze of looking glass rememberings..You have penned this beautifully....

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 23, 2011
What a beautiful and insightful glimpse into your soul. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
Axilea, "Sleeping Rooms" are sanctuaries for "mo(u)rning" and the captive halls of sleepless trysts -- the "intruders that look for warmth to escape their frozen core" is a masterfully created metaphor -- remorse and longing are the bed sheets blanketing longing and desire -- this is exciting work that probes at melancholy -- your verbiage conducts a symphony of emotions -- I bid you joy love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
Your verses enchant the soul and the imagination so effectively, Axilea. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
the way you juxtapose your images is indeed unique, and the design of your thoughts overwhelmingly intriguing ...

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2011
Axilea, Again, I read one of your astonishing poems...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
A profound and poignant choice of words ~
Splendid ending!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
Soulful and evocative...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
Excellent write Enjoyable reading
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
Axilea, your marvelous talent
thrives on sleepless nights...
-gene.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
In the night of dreams..and the struggle to get there as the mind so fights sleep...but oh, how when it finally does it takes us away :)
Christine

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 20, 2011
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ...'morning raindrops remind of past mourning'-----EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
For me, Axilea, a series of droplets here
and i'm feeling the rain between each;
how does sleep come if it comes at all
and then what does morning offer or bring?

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
Nice work...
fee

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
Awesome, and so... YOU. Love the play on morning/mourning. All in all, these are "heavy" ku's that really speek to me.

Little bird tracks on my mind,
a sandy, silent lullaby. --Charlie

Reviewed by Alan Abrams
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
who holds the key to the lock?

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 19, 2011
... this is the kind of sleep that is both stoutly resisted and yet yearned for, Axilea - a longed for place of sustenance (books), solidity - and dreams. Funny how light finds us in darkness. And how mo(u)rning can be both a relief and unwanted friend. Always a pleasure to indulge in your matrices of the mind and hungers of the human soul. xx


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