It’s late at night
there’s a flickering light
at her soul sill
/
blown out
not wanting to attract
dusty moths in search of light ;
intruders that look for warmth
to escape their frozen core
/
on a shelf
heavy books,
eyes forgotten between pages
permanent bookmarks
/
boudoir
colors and sigh(t)s,
her belongings
a protected sanctuary
/
bedroom
she is fighting sleep
until disarmed and drugged,
she falls captive
/
in deep red bed
receptive to dreams
of seagull tracks
on golden sand,
pictograms ;
of broken anchor
that rests on shore,
windy lullaby
/
morning
raindrops remind
of past mourning
/
then light
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Reviews of "(Sleeping) Rooms"
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2011
I loved walking through this maze of looking glass rememberings..You have penned this beautifully....
Axilea, "Sleeping Rooms" are sanctuaries for "mo(u)rning" and the captive halls of sleepless trysts -- the "intruders that look for warmth to escape their frozen core" is a masterfully created metaphor -- remorse and longing are the bed sheets blanketing longing and desire -- this is exciting work that probes at melancholy -- your verbiage conducts a symphony of emotions -- I bid you joy love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael
For me, Axilea, a series of droplets here
and i'm feeling the rain between each;
how does sleep come if it comes at all
and then what does morning offer or bring?
... this is the kind of sleep that is both stoutly resisted and yet yearned for, Axilea - a longed for place of sustenance (books), solidity - and dreams. Funny how light finds us in darkness. And how mo(u)rning can be both a relief and unwanted friend. Always a pleasure to indulge in your matrices of the mind and hungers of the human soul. xx
Regis
Always,
Deborah
Splendid ending!
Blessings,
Christine
Chip Bergeron
Love & peace be with you
William
thrives on sleepless nights...
-gene.
Christine
and i'm feeling the rain between each;
how does sleep come if it comes at all
and then what does morning offer or bring?
John
fee
Little bird tracks on my mind,
a sandy, silent lullaby. --Charlie