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Eidetic
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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 My picture of you cries

and in empathic warmth

for your laminar flame

peach hues of your skin

I shelter a sigh --

a slower afternoon passes

in eidetic pleasure:

with a note of sadness

a certain taste of  your entity

I identify your print

 

Recognized you are

but who am I?

a recollection of paint drops

bottled spots and folded lines

my features have become

elusive - diluted is my image

to strengthen sense of self

 

My picture of me fades

and I feel this life from within

in candlelit warmth, as we once were

when faceless and sinless

free of this burden, we loved

not in fake uniqueness

and mirrored delusion,

never hypnotized or self-absorbed

 

Again today, I let you recognize me

as I look at you

[at all of you]

and let myself love


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 Reviews of "Eidetic"
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 1, 2013
Truly beautiful and heartfelt!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 10, 2013
reaffirmation of who we are, who our lover, loved one is - not unlike gazing into a mirror, yet recalling them ourselves, eidetic-ally. Perception of self is at times agonizing, yet always a useful tool to audit, who we are - a poem to initiate analysis and ponder what is revealed - an enjoyable read for Axilia- I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on January 8, 2013
Faded love and the photo memories to bring it all back ... And so palpably!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 7, 2013
You have taught me a new word, Axilea: eidetic. Thank you. And thank you also for sharing this expressive offering of love. I am painfully aware of what love gone astray feels like right now. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on January 6, 2013
The thing is there are more reasons for sadness than lost romance, and in one way or other they hit us all. You have therefore written a poem that just about everybody cabn identify with, Axilea. Thank you so much....

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on January 6, 2013
I'm with Christine on this one. I read it various times, and could never tell whether you were talking to the reader, a well or once-loved relative, a lover or your old or new self. Any how you read it, the conclusion in warm and embracing, repentant, forgiving, all-inclusive, understanding and well, loving. --Charlie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 5, 2013
Such a clever poem, Axilea, and amazingly, one that can be read in a number of different ways.
Starkly different meanings... and yet one and the same whether I read it as a woman who is talking to her past lover, or whether I read it as a woman who is looking in the mirror, or perhaps even a picture of her former self...Clever girl! So profound.
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 5, 2013
Love washes over you like a warm shower, in this delightful love poem.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 5, 2013
allow it as it washes over you
budd


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