“Love is always magic. It's not rational, it doesn't follow any law. You can't make rules for it, you can't forbid it. You can't even make it disappear within yourself. It's alive like all magic...” Sophie Lark
It leaves me feeling
Forlorn and
Almost helpless
Each time we try
To reach each other
Through a sea
Of blockages and
Obligations.
You see me and
Try to shoulder your way
To my side,
While I,
So much smaller,
Struggle against what seems
Like a river of giants.
We've been trying for so long
And we will continue to do so
Despite the people and experiences
That would keep us separated
Forever,
Because we know we belong
Together.
The poetess in you revealed! With great passion and skill you have crafted a kind of longing and personal wish that comes from great love unrequited. Kudos.
Often the soul longs for the heart to be whole with someone else, it often turn out one feels it the other doesn't how lovely your words are penned, like an art in itself.
You nailed this one, hit it right out of the park. Love is not controlled by the mind, by others, by distance or time, or even society's ethics and morals. We cannot control who we love or who loves us any more than we can control the weather. Thanks for sharing this Rebecca I could truly relate to it.
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