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Rejected
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Enduring the emotional scar of rejection by a desired lover


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REJECTED


I stand here quiet and staring
Unable to breathe or speak
Mind and heart enraptured
My body still and meek
Paralyzed in ecstasy
Your face in my full view
I beg to ask the question
While my heart beats out the clue

What am I doing here? I ask
Oh, how do I belong?
Only handsome men of substance
Can sing to you their song
My character is lacking
My means so puny and few
Dreaming words of love and care
I want from such as you

So I walk away in silence
To wonder and atone
Rejected by all that’s decent
Lonesome and alone
Rejected by all that’s decent
Lonesome and alone

In a moment of exotic passion
Your image across my eyes
I’m dazzled by your beauty
Of treasures in sweet disguise
My heart is sorely yearning
For words of love and time
And close and personal contact
That never will be mine

Why is life so cruel with its
Fairness and deceit
Cheating lovers and their dreams
Beneath its sodden feet
My heart is sad and bitter
A disappointed mess
I only want what others have
Instead of ugliness

What am I doing here? I ask
Oh, how do I belong?
Only handsome men of substance
Can sing to you their song
My character is lacking
My means so puny and few
Dreaming words of love and care
I want from such as you

So I walk away in silence
To wonder and atone
Rejected by all that’s decent
Lonesome and alone
Rejected by all that’s decent
Lonesome and alone


Richard Lee Orey
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 Reviews of "Rejected"
Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on May 23, 2014
Been there several times, not a good thing, but your'e writing says it all.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 22, 2014
poignant read

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 21, 2014
Love is so much dearer to those who have loved and lost
to find the best treasures of life you must also bear the cost.
But...I do not preach. Kathy P. dances the dance, and that is so much better.

Reviewed by Kathy Parenteau
Reviewed on May 18, 2014
I fell in love with this poem. Hearts break only for a season, true love waits for everyone that last through out eternity.

Kathy

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 18, 2014
This is an entire new twist to the usual poetic themes you write--from deep passionate love to the lonely life of unrequited love and rejection. That soft drum beat in the background really adds mood to your recitation. Well done, Richard.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 18, 2014
A truly heartfelt rendition Richard...
I'm wondering if there is a tine to it?
My best wishes always,
Diana...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 18, 2014
Your words (lyrics/song) express a universal and timeless theme of this life/world, Richard. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 18, 2014
Makes a good "unrequited love" song. To use a trite expression, "Been there, done that."

Ron


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