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Careful (song)
by Rose Loya → (All Poetry by Rose Loya)
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(try not to trust too much..... )

Video streaming on the net
can tell you who I am,
or maybe not, depending on
if I'm a liar-scam.....

but then I would suppose
that everyone does have this option.
Internet is quite handy that way-
ask my mom's God-son.

His dream was to find a Beauty,
(he was filthy rich),
so he set out on the web.
Instead, he got a bitch.

A mean and vile and selfish woman
who lied not about looks,
but instead told fairy-tales
about her truth.
It took

3 and one half million dollars
for him to finally loose her.
Yet, he says he got off easy
from his mental bruiser.

He now has his piece of mind
back again.
Lying can alter

not only looks
but one's intentions
or whatever else ought

a lying, scheming
wunder-kind who's dallying
for dollars,

or one who's NOT blessed
with beauty, and doesn't mind
soul-squalor.

About my mom's god-son,
he's now dating a school teacher.
She loves him for who he is
and not what he got used for.

He feels he knows this
definitely,
we think he's pretty sure.

Remember a few lines
ago, how i described his old lure?
I wrote he WAS
filthy rich.

Remember this good, right lesson-
if you must take search on sites
beware of liar's inventions .....

Looks are not the only thing
subject to truth amiss;
ugly hearts can also hide
behind internet's kiss .....

(Blessings)

copyright 2007 Rose Loya      

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 Reviews of "Careful (song)"
Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on February 6, 2007
An unfortunate reality...

good message.....Art sun...

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
Good msg. here Rose.
He might've saved himself a few bucks if instead of the internet, he had met her somewhere in Calabassas...but then again, probably not :)) LOL

Edwin

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
This is a poem of deep wisdom. Enjoyed

Reviewed on February 5, 2007
One has to be so careful on the net. Read my poem "An Advice To Vulnerable Women On The Net".

Some comes with many ID's pretending to be many characters, and these people are very manipulative, they are mind-controllers. I hate to see my friends on the net fall victims to these types of people; but sometimes your friends won't even listen or respond to you when ou write to talk to them, so you can only stand aside and worry for them.

Anyway...this is a very thought-provoking write, and has a good message. I hope my friend sees this, if she hasn't read my poem already.

Thank you for sharing such an important message!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
Rose,

Excellent warning. Reminds me of words in the song by Janis Joplin but with a small twist. "Truth is Just Another Word for Nothing Left to Lose." Very well written piece.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2007
So very true this one is good.


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