Outside the storms are raging
Darkening the skies
Inside the war is waging
I can see it in your eyes
Your voice begins to tremble
When you see I'm going to cry
You tell me that you're sorry
But that it's time to say good-bye
CHORUS
And my tears mix with the rain
‘Cause I'm losing you again
And "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart
If I asked you, would you stay
Another hour, one more day
Because "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart
You've packed up all your mem'ries
As you're heading out the door
You say that you still love me
But you can't stay here anymore
I follow out to see you
For the last time, as you go
You turn to me to tell me
We'll both be fine...I know
CHORUS
But my tears mix with the rain
‘Cause I'm losing you again
And "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart
If I asked you, would you stay
Another hour, or, one more day
Because, "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart
I thought you'd always be here
Just like I knew you should
But you said you couldn't leave her
Why did I think you could
This time you're really leaving
And I'll close the open door
I'll cry until the morning
Then go on as before
CHORUS
But my tears mix with the rain
‘Cause I'm losing you again
And "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart
If you see me, walk away
It doesn't matter anyway
‘Cause "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart
the chord progression on this piece is relatively simple..4/4 time, alternating Cmaj7 and G, rounding with Amin to D. picked, not strummed.
*just a note- i wrote this looking through the eyes of my best friend. and feeling her incredible pain for a 'no win' situation....thanks..k
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Reviews of "I'm Sorry,Doesn't Mend This Broken Heart"
Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2002
This is such a wonderful write!!! It flows beautifully.
wow krissy you are amazing...so talented,wish I could hear you sing it.
hugs from
kay
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Hi Krissy,
Very nice flow and story.I think the hook is right on the money.I'm sorry just doesn't cut it sometimes.Soft acoustical would work well here. Great stuff. Gregg
Hi Sweet Krissy,
Love it my friend...
"To love is to never
say I'm sorry"...
For if you really love
someone, you would not do anything to hurt them...
Or at least try not to..
Beautiful write...
Scada
Great as always!
Blue eyed fish...
hugs from
kay
Very nice flow and story.I think the hook is right on the money.I'm sorry just doesn't cut it sometimes.Soft acoustical would work well here. Great stuff. Gregg
Love it my friend...
"To love is to never
say I'm sorry"...
For if you really love
someone, you would not do anything to hurt them...
Or at least try not to..
Beautiful write...
Love and hugs,
Trixie
simply beautiful. Sage
I hope things work out for your friend. Lovely piece.
Jenni
Sandie Angel :o)