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I'm Sorry,Doesn't Mend This Broken Heart
by Kristian L Mahrling-Harding → (All Poetry by Kristian L Mahrling-Harding)
  
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Outside the storms are raging
Darkening the skies
Inside the war is waging
I can see it in your eyes

Your voice begins to tremble
When you see I'm going to cry
You tell me that you're sorry
But that it's time to say good-bye

CHORUS
And my tears mix with the rain
‘Cause I'm losing you again
And "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart

If I asked you, would you stay
Another hour, one more day
Because "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart


You've packed up all your mem'ries
As you're heading out the door
You say that you still love me
But you can't stay here anymore

I follow out to see you
For the last time, as you go
You turn to me to tell me
We'll both be fine...I know

CHORUS
But my tears mix with the rain
‘Cause I'm losing you again
And "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart

If I asked you, would you stay
Another hour, or, one more day
Because, "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart

I thought you'd always be here
Just like I knew you should
But you said you couldn't leave her
Why did I think you could

This time you're really leaving
And I'll close the open door
I'll cry until the morning
Then go on as before

CHORUS
But my tears mix with the rain
‘Cause I'm losing you again
And "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart

If you see me, walk away
It doesn't matter anyway
‘Cause "I'm sorry" doesn't mend this broken heart

the chord progression on this piece is relatively simple..4/4 time, alternating Cmaj7 and G, rounding with Amin to D. picked, not strummed.
*just a note- i wrote this looking through the eyes of my best friend. and feeling her incredible pain for a 'no win' situation....thanks..k

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 Reviews of "I'm Sorry,Doesn't Mend This Broken Heart"
Reviewed by Scada (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2002
This is such a wonderful write!!! It flows beautifully.

Scada

Reviewed by Gilles Marchand
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
How can you mend a brocken hhheeaarrrttttt...?
Great as always!
Blue eyed fish...

Reviewed by Gilles Marchand
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
wow krissy you are amazing...so talented,wish I could hear you sing it.
hugs from
kay

Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Hi Krissy,
Very nice flow and story.I think the hook is right on the money.I'm sorry just doesn't cut it sometimes.Soft acoustical would work well here. Great stuff. Gregg

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Hi Sweet Krissy,
Love it my friend...
"To love is to never
say I'm sorry"...
For if you really love
someone, you would not do anything to hurt them...
Or at least try not to..
Beautiful write...

Love and hugs,
Trixie

Reviewed by Steve Patterson
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Krissy - don't know anything about the music, but the poetry was perfect. good rythmn & good yrhme. flows great. like it very very much.-steve

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Lovely and sad..Sometimes I think the words "I"m Sorry" mean nothing..

Reviewed by Sage
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Krissy love, I could hear it in my head
simply beautiful. Sage

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
What a great song....all the sad songs are the best...wonder why...;-)

Reviewed by Alpha Woman (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
A lovely read...especially out loud! Alpha

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Krissy, ...you are so very sweet and caring..
I hope things work out for your friend. Lovely piece.
Jenni

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
great lyric

Reviewed by Harley Davidson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Those lyrics struck a familiar chord, with me, Krissy! A tune I can relate to sooooo well. (For now at least:-)) Thanks hun...

Reviewed on March 23, 2002
Heartfelt and lyrical, Krissy! Wish I can sing this song.

Sandie Angel :o)


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