What, Must I Be Thinking? (poem) by Kristian L Mahrling-Harding on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by dogenoeht

Reviewed on June 27, 2002

nicewunkiddo!

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Excellent write. Good thing our "moments" change.

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

I know you cry sister. I hear the echo's. We'll just boo hoo together.. Yep, what must I be think too..LOL...Think scented candles, hot tubs, classical music... aromatherapy. Here I'm preachin' and , well here I hit the jazcoozie before I sound like a hypocrite.. LOL....Love you..

Smiles, Jo Jo

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

smile. me

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Hi Krissy,
I don't know you as well as everyone here, but I know I LOVE this piece!!! You truly have a gift with your expression!!!!

Hugs,
Maria
xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Hi Krissy,
I am sorry that you're
having one of those
moments...
We all have them from
time to time...
May the sun shine upon
your face, and give
you a great
((((BIG SMILE))))...

HUGS,
Trixie

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

*Offering you a bottle of prozak and a GREAT BIG HUG*. Love ya girl,

Scada

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Great poem. Lots of great questions. It's when we stop asking questions, we stop living. Excellent.

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Beautiful lady of such elegant class, your heart as a tomb of gold, that glitters within your eyes, oh such a gentle spirit that sings of sweet songs of the dove, you are only in transformation as the spoken words document great love, the nights get lonley and the days are short, the knight in shinning armor, shall soon be knocking at your door, oh the signs of lonley that sits before each an every one door, we must first love the beauty of self, then the charm will be entering the heart of love.

Selections of faith shall sometimes make love delay, the cleansing of self will eliminate the toxins, purifications of the soul shall sometimes, make lonley a hard pill to take, open the doors be not afraid, scars sometimes will close doors to the blessings of a good man. Beautiful lady he right there before your eyes. Humble and you will know him when he comes.

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Hi Krissy,
You are just a very warm and caring person,
who takes on to big a work load,
I know its not much help, but I am thinking and caring about you.
Love.
Tomas

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

deep in the heart of Krissy...thought provoking...well done

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 22, 2002

Nice write Krissy! This flows very well!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$