When tears stream
Like, water down the drain
Where creases form across the pages
Too wet... too ripe with pain
Why then, should blissful smiles stretch
To frame the canvas, torn and tattered
What thoughts prevail in such a wretch
That peace exudes from one so shattered?
How does the soul, so recognize
Mistakes that must needs rectify
Perhaps, found in the soft blue eyes
Of abiding bridegroom standing by
For in as much as past can blemish
Tarnish hearts of lessor grit
Encase said organ drowned and frozen
Rarer those, who quicken it
*I want to personally thank everyone for your well wishes and prayers. As Tom has reported, I am on the mend and resting..(okay..trying to rest ~grin~).
I am more than grateful for the support and outpouring of love from all of you.
As I am still not supposed to be up often..Tom will continue to answer any questions and relay messages.
love, hugs and blessings....krissy
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Reviews of "Opus Concluded"
Reviewed by kj
Reviewed on June 17, 2003
as always lady you make my day I always hope that god keeps giving you the wonderful gift of word. keep up the beautiful work. I also like being the first to hear your work.
Great news that you are on the mend, and Krissy,
your poem is a masterpiece,your poetry is sheer bliss,it's heaven... to be sure!
Get well mate soon.Say hi to that guy of yours from me too.
Best wishes always to you and yours.
from
Kay
Nice to see you writing and that you are doing well. Vivid poem.
A good friend gave me advise after my surgery which I will pass onto you, "keep the tension on those muscles at a minimum till you are ready to piss gasoline again." Sorry for the crudeness, he gets that way once in a while.
“Being a couple yet free is our next challenge on the evolutionary ladder. This book successfully helps us unravel the myths that block that achievement. It does it with warmth, with readability, and with balance. It recreates everyday problems and
Love
kj
your poem is a masterpiece,your poetry is sheer bliss,it's heaven... to be sure!
Get well mate soon.Say hi to that guy of yours from me too.
Best wishes always to you and yours.
from
Kay
Nice to see you writing and that you are doing well. Vivid poem.
A good friend gave me advise after my surgery which I will pass onto you, "keep the tension on those muscles at a minimum till you are ready to piss gasoline again." Sorry for the crudeness, he gets that way once in a while.
Glad you feeling stronger......take care of yourself Okay!1
Outstanding write girl!!
Love
Tinka
Take care,
Jill
Is so good to see a poem posted by you hun. You continue to be in my thoughts and meditations. Take care hun.
Namaste'
Melanie