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That Day You Said Goodbye
by Chris Rosenau → (All Poetry by Chris Rosenau)
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In the heart of every mother.

Two years old we were leaving, walking out the door,


I kissed you on the cheek and said I love you once more


You took me by surprise, shocked me standing still


on the first day you said goodbye.


 


Five years old we were leaving, walking out the door


I kissed you on the cheek and said I love you once more


thought, "It's hard to send them off to school"


and a tear gleamed in my eye,


standing in the classroom and that day you said goodbye.


 


10 years old we were leaving, walking out the door


I kissed you on the cheek and said I love you once more


She'll have fun at camp, I said, so why am I gonna cry


Then you looked at me and smiled and that day you said goodbye


 


Eighteen Years old we were leaving, Walking out the door


I kissed you on the cheek and said I love you once more


They say that college is easy, that's a fabricated lie


You told me not to worry and that day you said goodbye


 


Twenty Five years old you were leaving, walking out the door


I kissed you on the cheek, and said I love you once more


The cancer was just to sudden and I too wanted to die


You looked at me and held my hand with a smile on your face


Then you told me that you love me, and that day you said,


"goodbye".


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 Reviews of "That Day You Said Goodbye"
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
Very origianal and loving poem that touches the heart of all parents for when you love your child that love will always be returned to you double. Sweet and poignant Crissy.

Fee

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
Very poignant and really good use of repetition. Well written.

Brett

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2007
You heard wrong: It was au revoir, we'll meet again. Wait till she'll have her first born. Victor


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