Left Behind (poem) by Chris Rosenau on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 12, 2007

This is a most compelling write, Crissy. I can relate to many of the sentiments that you express withing your verses. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on January 29, 2007

I love how straightforward your poetry is. There is great strength in the narration of this poem which intriguingly contrasts the feelings of invisibility.

Brett

Reviewed by . Crystalwizard

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

I like the imagery I see when reading this. Favorite line: Jumping through the cracks of time?

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

yes, younger i was a vase behind a couch
teen years i was the flower in the vase
adult i dissappeared
in the times that i was missed i can away with poetry and stories
and a wonderful imagination
i agree with Kooten in a way
it is all in what we get from it
and how we view it
enjoyed this share

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

We are. (period) But~ what we do with the short time we are, is what matters for our children. Many questions being asked here, and many answers lie within each one...Very mind provoking write!
I like your style!
Nice to meet you! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

I've felt this way many times in my life...blank space in a room, "nothing more!" I liked this!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Take control and get infront..

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Focusing on the wrong thing,A mind stuck in traffic,
Well done,
Michael

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Crissy,

You said a mouthful and it's even worse when they will not hear.
The feeling of being useless is an all time low. Great write.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Perfect way to wake him up, but if continues to sleep, just kick him out of your life. You deserve better. Victor

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

This one is very good...you write well this view of one caught within the moment of time, from the forgotten of taday into the left of tommorrow, an expression makes a statement within itself...

nice poetry.....enjoyed....Art Sun...