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Immortal
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*In the midst of damnation,* *Far away* *Where man women* *And animals fray* *There is this story* *That I must tell* *Deep, deep in the darkness* *Where Immortals dwell* *Time is ticking* *For what this life leaves* *Soon the world will be taken* *By impurities* *The world will be aflame* *Screams will arise* *The priest can do nothing* *No matter how hard he tries* *Soon screams of pain will all retire* *Black masses of coal* *All that�s left of the fire* *The sun has descended* *And night has arose* *Yet darker and colder* *Still the night grows* *Goodness Forsaken* *Though Least Einen hier* *Hopefulness now forgotten* *Banished by fear* *Alone in this world* *I see time go by* *Yet never I decease* *For Immortal are I*

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Reviews of "Immortal"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 9, 2007

The key word here to me is "immortal," Crissy. Nicely done. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 3, 2007

excellent piece
enjoyed much
Live On

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

Nice suspense in this apocalyptic piece.

Brett

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

a powerful proclamation of immortality surrounded by finality ...

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

A powerful message in this writing!

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Great vision in this one,loved it,Strong message,
God Bless,
Michael

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Crissy,

Hopefully, we won't be running around hollering, "the sky is falling."

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Nicely written, flows smooth with a powerful message within. Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

Very well presented and great word flow with images that are crisp and clear. Like this one Crissy

Fee

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 30, 2007

Love the elegance of your words.

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