Child abuse is so sad. I agree with Michael. The subject is as terrible as a car wreck and as well written as and wondrous as a flower blooming.
~E
Reviewed by A. Hack (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2002
Wonderful poem, Celeste.
krisette
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2002
Celeste first I had chills, Now I am speechless. Having lost a son this just touched my very soul.Tears. It is a very poweful poem. A great write. Floria
I had to read this over a few times. Really well crafted. A great economy with words, it's as terrible as a car wreck and as wondrous as a flower blooming.
This poem is constructed in a way that demands one to read on and, having done so, demands a re-read again and again. Beautiful and poignant language intelligently using the power of contrast to make a point that needs deep reflection and positive action from politicians AND the community alike. This is really a classic heartfelt cry for action to eliminate child violence and abuse. Thank you for posting it.
A poignant story about letting go of a narcissist in your life. Have you ever been attacked FULL force by a narcissist? It's the closest thing to being stabbed over and over in the back.
Suspenseful and close to home, Rain of Deception 2 will leave you in Tears. Much like Part 1, this will shocking sequel will keep you on the edge of your fingertips.
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
~E
krisette
Afrika
i felt this.
Very effective counter points...hand of love and hand of destruction.
Gina
very well done!!!!
10+
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JC xoxoxoxo
ezxcellent write...