breakthrough (for all my friends at AD) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2004

I feel your words. Great work.

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on March 28, 2004

You are essential!
So there.
Wonderful writing Karla.
John

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2004

Well I for one, always seek out your name when I get time to spend on AD and this is yet another winner, thanks Karla

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 28, 2004

Thanks Karla
for always sharing your wonderful
thoughts

William

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 28, 2004

This has a fresh, new kinda feel, though expressed by others at times, this one 'sits up and gives notice'... Karla, you are always worth reading because your words come straight out of your heart and your gut! That's what makes it a guaranteed 'day-changer'... Carry on.. oh, where are my manners: YOU'RE WELCOME! LOL. katy xox.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

a wonderful poem, read by many ...

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Oh, this is beautiful, Karla!

A most excellent write...
And you are a beautiful poet!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

As long as I keep paying my ISP I will read you
Texan poets are just as good as any poet
Your friend
Lurve ya......Ron

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

I like this Karla! Very much! : )

Jack

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Wonderful to see you in an up mood again, Karla!;-)
Another superb write!

Reviewed by Rose L

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Karla,

So it would seem that both poet and muse needed some words to soothe what ails....glad we both got them in abundance.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Not only read, but heard loud and clear. Inspiration is such a wonderful feeling.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Brava love flows beautifuly.,

Always prayers.

Peggy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Your love flows like a river in this wonderful write, Karla. So very well done!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Wonderful work Karla. God Bless You. Be well.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Wonderful write Karla, I am glad I have the pleasure of reading your words...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Wonderful indeed Karla! It is always a pleasure to read your work.

Sorry I've been away a lot lately. Since my Dad has passed away, I'm staying a three days and two nights at my mom's place every week so she will not think that she's alone.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

To miss reading a poem of my friend Karla, is tantamount to missing the air I breath, hard to give up, hard to live without...Peace thru Friendships, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

This was so strong Karla, I am so glad you are feeling a bit better,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

What a difference a day makes! Keep thinking positive and keep writing. Love ya, Susan

Reviewed by Vicky Jeter

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Karla
"beating her fists against seemingly unpenatrable walls . . ."
No doubt the epitome to The Writer doing battle with The Writer's Block. This is classic. Love Vicky

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

As long as you draw pen to paper, there will always be someone to read your writings, whatever mood they are created in.

{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Yes this is so true......thanks for sharing your words Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

kara,
I was just coming to look for you when I found your your latest at the very top of the new poetry page. I'm so glad that you have snapped out of it, whenever it was. We are told that writing is nine parts preparation and one part inspiration. That's true but another part writing is believing in yourself and your work.

Speaking of work this piece is a good one .

love

john+

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Love ya Karla....your writing is always
appreciated and read by me....you touch
my heart many times..glad you are feeling
better....we all get down from time to time..
it's called life....lol...love ya...floria

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

(((Karla)))

so glad you are inspired! see what a little support (and prayer!) can do??? don't beat yourself up, honey; we ALL have those moments of self-doubt and despair; Lord knows I do! Keep up the great job, and may your pen NEVER run out of ink, and may your muse ALWAYS be active!

Wonderful write that shows your creativity and thanks; very well done! BRAVA! Enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

(((MORE HUGS))) (just because I love you...)

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

Will always read the words from your beautiful heart, Karla.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2004

You bet they are, hon!
Keep up the good work.
*Hugs*