in the endless ocean of words i am but one miniscule drop of water one tiny particle in the middle of a tsunami i fight the current and flow off on my own and my words become rivers
in endless atmospheres of words i am but one small molecule of air one tiny atom inhaled by a muse i am encouraged to breathe i slowly exhale and my words become poems
in endless storms of falling words i am but a flickering bolt of lightning one brief flash amid stunning brilliance i fight to last to live longer than a moment and my words echo like thunder
(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
That's a remarkable write. You used metaphors that would never have occurred to me. Wonderful
Karla, each time you write, you strengthen your perfection, someday to the point beyond all the rest of us...each time you get better & better, Peace thru Self-Knowledge, Ed & Rufuz
Your words do speak, and many hear them in the way you present your poems! Powerful, outstanding poetry; you have really come a long way in your writing skills! Keep up the great work, and maybe one day we will be seeing your name in the winner's circle here for the poetry contest! You DESERVE to win, in my honest opinion!! You are a poet to be reckoned with, and your poetry does teach, touch, and inspire many (most of all, ME!)! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on March 29, 2004
They sure do echo like thunder...
ROARING THUNDER....as they speak out
to us all Karla...great writing again
from you...blessings to you...floria
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Your words do speak, and many hear them in the way you present your poems! Powerful, outstanding poetry; you have really come a long way in your writing skills! Keep up the great work, and maybe one day we will be seeing your name in the winner's circle here for the poetry contest! You DESERVE to win, in my honest opinion!! You are a poet to be reckoned with, and your poetry does teach, touch, and inspire many (most of all, ME!)! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
ROARING THUNDER....as they speak out
to us all Karla...great writing again
from you...blessings to you...floria