Storm clouds off in the distance inspired this. (They're moving away.) *grins*
Now if it will clear up so I can see Aurora's dance...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ripping the page in abject fury stabbing innocent paper with anger in my pen~~ again again
striking like continuous lightning each bolt an open pathway for the rain to begin~~ flash flash
tearing cavities in stormy moods releasing the bitterness in showers of healing~~ write write
I almost missed this Karla....I keep getting kicked
off the site..grrr......Powerful writing..really
good form here....glad the storm missed you....
it's the only thing about summer that I hate...
Have a blessed Easter Karla....floria
Gotta love them thunderstorms...:) You inspired me to run with an idea from you poem Aurora, thanks so much, something humorous as always...LOL! Peace thru Humor, Ed & Rufuz
I love the imagery of nature and emotion together - for too often they feel one and the same.....nature's fury often turns our anguish into stunning visual effect. Well written!
Thanks for your kind words on my work.
~Rose~
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Hey what a write, so much truth, seeing now I may have cancer, but what the heck this is fab
I love the way this sounds. Read it fast and your tounge will rollercoaster between the words. I would like to see 3 or four more verses of this followed by a surprising twist in the end.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
What I like about this poem is how it shows the passion it takes to write. Hugs,
Sheila
off the site..grrr......Powerful writing..really
good form here....glad the storm missed you....
it's the only thing about summer that I hate...
Have a blessed Easter Karla....floria
you pull no punches.........and thats why you are you!!!
lol and we are all greatful for that!
pax
A
lol
a good write!
john+
Keep these wonderful poems coming...
God Bless
~Michelle~
But a helluve poem!
Excellent Karla!!
Love Tinka
Gina
Thanks for your kind words on my work.
~Rose~
Reindeer
You if anyone can do it. I challenge you.
with a snicker,
Mark
AND DON'STOP
wILLIAM
Love it!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your biggest fan, your twin, karen lynn. :D