wishes (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

Karla~!

You are the poetess magnificent!!

Happy Christmas,

Lance

Reviewed on April 12, 2004

Hi Karla,
You have some really deep words there. You put them down well.
Your wish just might come sooner than you think.
Help is on the way. Please read the message I sent today to whom I think is your sister.
It might help you a bit.
Pray and keep faith.
My prayers are with you.
Blessings,
Judith

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

Great wish Karla, I can relate. l&p g

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

But then the new frustrations would arrive... I love the feel of this one.
Happy Easter and prayers always.

Peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

You wanna use mine?

Take care sweet lady!!

But hey just send those troubles my may I WANT MY BALLOON BACK!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

(((Karla)))

You are ALWAYS in my prayers! I am sorry you are having problems at work. in the end, he is the one who will lose, NOT you or anyone else at our job! great way to let out any frustration; write on, baby gurl!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sympathetic) twin sister, karen lynn. :(

((((MORE HUGS)))) (just because i love you and care about you....)

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

Good writing Karla..so sorry you had
a bad day....Keep writing...it helps to
relieve the frustration...a Happy Blessed Easter
to you...floria

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

Let it dissolve in the softness of warm and scented Spring breeze. And all "heavy atmosphere" will be overcome by gentleness, as it always is.
A blessed Spring and Easter to you and Karen, sweet Friend.
Thank you,
~Alexandra~

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on April 10, 2004

I'm with you... nice write.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

Karla, you and Karen are in my prayers, I pray some of those books are helpful...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Release your frustration, rant, rant, rant, you can talk to me whenever you wish...
God Bless

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

Wonderful write Karla, I've got you in prayer!
Never hold on to anger, it only makes you bitter!
While the other person doesn't feel a thing!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

I wish for you, dear Karla, less pain,
I wish for you, less strain,
I wish for you a more happy less stressful life,
I wish for you just plain happiness & no strife...

I do not wish for you riches, as people do become bitches,
I do not wish for you anthing more than you need but no stitches...

I wish for you and your sister, as always, all the best, keep on pluggin', not much choice I am afraid, Peace thru Peace, ED & Rufuz

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

karla,
the day may have been a bummer
but the poem that it engendered
is a good'un

hang in there

john+

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

Ah Karla, I understand all to well!

Reindeer

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

Great idea.....I wish that the bad days would just turn to stone..

I guess the bad days are what shape us.....Great work Karla......hang in there.......ty and Happy Easter, Dani

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

very powerful write, loved reading it

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

Karla, sometimes bad days come in bunches. I hope your problem vanishes. I understand your feelings. Love and Luck
and a very Happy Easter dear heart. Hugs xoxxo

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

Hey put them in trunk and padlock with time bomb cast into sea,every night tell gone, one can't turn clock back, but is there to be rewound. Karla you're always in my mere prayers..

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

hang in there, Lady Buckeye...although, I can relate to this, having been through a recent bout of harassmet.
Frankly, I love Sherry's idea mentioned below.
The idea of writing the name of dude or dudette who has been less than cordial(...you know the kind...they appear to be missing a chromosone or two and are still struggling with the concept of walking erect?) peeing and or pooping on them (in name only of course) and flushing them away seems so just...rofl.

Reviewed by * ashura (Reader)

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

And may it land on the White House .... where all the other hot air is. LOL

((hugz)) are for bad days

((cuddles)) are for awful days

If it's worse than that ... head for the whisky bottle (grin)

michael

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp

Reviewed on April 9, 2004

Ditto!

I will keep you in my thoughts.