i took a walk in the misty dawn. humidity dripped down on my face like tears. fog and i embraced in a hug. i know exactly how painful loss feels.
i took a walk, saw a forming storm. furious bolts of lightning slashed in anger!! thunder shouted out its rage!!!! i know exactly how bitterness feels.
i took a walk in a springtime field. the flowers were reaching toward the heavens. they were grateful to be alive. i know exactly how thankfulness feels.
i took a walk in the evening air. the sun had just set after a perfect day. it had completed its mission. i know exactly how achievement feels.
i took a walk at around midnight. nightbirds sang a soft lullaby to the earth. i felt its calming inflence. i know exactly how contentment feels.
I also know how contentment feels, everytime I read one of your calming poems, and this one is the most calming I have found of late...Peace thru Peace, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
This is lovely karla...each line had great
flow and beautiful message...Happy Blessed
Easter to you...floria
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
excellent karla
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2004
Perfectamundo, This is simply beautiful, really gives the most wonderous pictures...
A wide range of emotions captured in this splended little poem! Very well done, Karla; you are getting better and better at your craft! Keep up the great work you are already doing!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and biggest fan!), Karen Lynn. :D
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
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God Bless
~Michelle~
Love Tinka
flow and beautiful message...Happy Blessed
Easter to you...floria
intelligent and thoughtful write........
lol
wish i wrote it!
This is excellent...
SMILES
HAPPY EASTER BLESSINGS AND ALWAYS PRAYERS.....
Lady Peg
A wide range of emotions captured in this splended little poem! Very well done, Karla; you are getting better and better at your craft! Keep up the great work you are already doing!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin (and biggest fan!), Karen Lynn. :D
I have learned from the entwined message, and I have enjoyed the artistic contents of "walking in harmony".
I Salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU