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I Want To Walk
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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~Fiction~


Poem Artwork

One foot
in front
of the
other...
Walking used to be so easy.
One small
step for
man, one
giant leap
for mankind...
Body trembling, feeling queasy...
...And man
must walk...
before they
dance...
Never gave it a second thought.
...They shall
run and
not be
weary, they
shall walk
and not
faint...
A drive by shooting!   I got shot.
...Arise, and
take up
thy bed
and walk...
Don't you think I am trying to??
A journey
of a
thousand miles
begins with a
single step...

I want to walk...i really do.

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "I Want To Walk"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on May 27, 2004
wow! I got chills! Superb
piece! Just Brilliant!
Thanks for all reviews you
have left lately!

Reviewed on May 26, 2004
This is another amazing piece...
God BLess
Michelle~

Reviewed on May 26, 2004
journey must start with that first single step and the desire to take it,
nice write
Tommy

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
GUNS, and spiders, why I turned down a 10 year contract, with Boeing military.

Bader did it against all odds and got back up in the old spit, and lead us to victory, with his great way of air warfare.

Hope this is only a poem

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
This reminds me of my mom's struggle with Rheumatoid arthritis, this is how she feels about walking. Moving piece.

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Very insightful poem. I enjoyed the walk alot Poet. Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Very powerful poem Karla! You do these so well, because
of the very reason that you suffer! Funny isn't it,that
only those who know suffering, can truly write about it
with any real conviction, and be credible.;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Well done, Karla. You've very powerfully described the agony those who have lost the ability to walk must go through, one step at a time.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
This is a very well crafted piec Karla!!

Sad but very powerful!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 26, 2004
(((Karla)))

Sad, but uniquely creative write! Very well done; enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 26, 2004
Great write. Very creative.


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